..forever...
 

If you were here with me, we could do so many things together as I love you more than ever before. As you'd touch my heart deep in it's core, that every single day im craving for you more and more. with you on fire you'd make a rapper like me to settle down and retire just by admiring and to adore. as we just 2 little kids soon to grow up, but for some reason i always had real feelings for you as you still my sweet butta cup. when you need me to be right by ya side I there for you my lady, as you already noe... i love you baby..just dial my digits, but when your ready and single, when can we date? im always thinking about you always and forever, but im thinking how we could be together. im just a wondering wonderer searching for a girl of my life, yet i think i found her and i want her to be my wife. as we both fell in love again itll be you and me starting a whole new journey. but here me out again... I'll love you till da end...

anyone like this verse? also do i need help wit this?

ur stuc. is torn all to hell! kinda put it in sum kinda of format........like
1st line.... If you were here with me, we could do so many things together as I love you more than ever before.
2nd line....As you'd touch my heart deep in it's core, that every single day im craving for you more and more.
3rd line....with you on fire you'd make a rapper like me to settle down and retire just by admiring and to adore


yo right now the shit u got up there jus looks like a paragraph

nice drop, thats what im feeling right now... I just finished writting a peice like that you'll have to read it ima post it after this reply...

neway, flow was solid every line matched the next. Alot of emotion flowing through this peice maybe cause im in the same boat i suppose... Vocab was here and there, thats ok nothing really special about vocabulary... neway, nice drop....
thats all i got... lol

Peace...