Can any1 help me out
 

hey i just need some tips and shit for writing better battles

well first off........ u needa rhyme
once u get that down well moce to the basics

arent there like differnt kinds of rhyming

umm are u fucked or sum shit

what you mean ^^^^^^^^^^^^^

yes there is...well wow your a smart one huh..

theres metaphorical rhyming..an so on

u can have a rhyme like

hear my gun go bang//
cum on ya face wit my son name the Wang

Or basic nursery rhyming which is gay now dayz an wont get u a win.........

anything else kid

what is a puch line......i dont understand completly

can you like do some examples or someshay

rymein isn't wat sounds the same.... rymein has same amout of sylobles, and wat u can make it sound like.... but that comes to poor judjment... thats y textin is so hard... some people just can't feel er flow or sum shit... but ya their is diffrent kinds off rymein... it's like a unique style, everyone got one; some poeple just don't know the others style

so......foucs on the syables when wrting down shit on this site to win battles

and punchlines are lines that will cut the opponent deep, get to their nerves and hert them emotionaly or physicly

exactly a PUNCh is

well peep all my battles ill have one or 2 or three punches in
More Punches the better..
there basically metaphors that Hit hard..


Like

u soundin tite at rap//
is like mikeal jackson actin blak.. u no....

OR ya rap games mediocore//
ya chances of beatin me is like a fag in a game of strate poker..


u no
shit like dat kid

like making fun of them

u can also hav mulites
where are
rhymes in the middle ofya lines

ya if u saw some battles have last words like:

or-take - mistake
asshole - dark-poll

shit like dat u know what im sayin dawg