Justin Time vs. Complexe Illness vs. Mr W Rite
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
20line max.
REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!

in 12 apiece i suppose

Checkin in holla backk

here they are

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137773 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137803
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137745
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137798
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137811

yo ill face u

iight loook this 1 is for

" Mr W.Rite "

Yo im a Big dogg sikk and left for u is only Clues
Mr W.rite u are right about something dogg youre gonna lose
Now thats some Great news im slaughtering this fag
Nigga be for real i hold more wins than a Grocery Bag
You leared multiplecation in school u kno 2+2 at least
So dumb battle 2 people jpoll said 20 lines max he said 12 a Peice
Dont u GEt it im gonna kill ya fake ass dispose of ur whackness
Punches Personals and flow whoa look back-miss,look at all u realli lack-this
Might have some werid shit but dogg and u better Grin-u-bitch
The best punch you got on me is if i Move-In-To-IT


" Justin Time "

Man if we had a Rivelrey man never b trues
Justin time i kno ur Just in time to Lose
I Kill niggaz like u With Ease ill beat ur ass
If we had a Punch(line) Compition 5 minutes u whouldint last
Now lemmie get this sraight u accualy think ur good
Think u smart u damn retard got the brain compacity of Wood
Now that aint good not 1 part sounds decint
You see me dogg and ur gym coach explained well see Sprint

( Sprint cause hes scared )

10 lines thats all
hell the other kid didnt even check in
Complexe step your game up man


keyin his death in 10 lines..






Im still killin these newb bitches, still got fans in waves of bunches
He’s still a loser, still wack and for christ sake still explainin punches
And yea I peeped ya sig…spellings awful, u some kinda fool, shit
If I were you I’d quit my day job…and go back to school bitch
Complex Illnesse, yea right…hate being the one to call you out
His moms had cow, and then went straight to the slaughter house
No notables or accolades...resume is bare and least commended
I throw mirage of punches...while his was never there to begin with
but I’ll just end it...too busy laughing at the lines you wrote yourself
guess I’ll cut this bitch some slack... before he chokes to death

Yo im a Big dogg sikk and left for u is only Clues
Mr W.rite u are right about something dogg youre gonna lose
Now thats some Great news im slaughtering this fag
Nigga be for real i hold more wins than a Grocery Bag
You leared multiplecation in school u kno 2+2 at least
So dumb battle 2 people jpoll said 20 lines max he said 12 a Peice
Dont u GEt it im gonna kill ya fake ass dispose of ur whackness
Punches Personals and flow whoa look back-miss,look at all u realli lack-this
Might have some werid shit but dogg and u better Grin-u-bitch
The best punch you got on me is if i Move-In-To-IT

No Real Punches Or Personals Flow Was Okay

8/10

Im still killin these newb bitches, still got fans in waves of bunches
He’s still a loser, still wack and for christ sake still explainin punches
And yea I peeped ya sig…spellings awful, u some kinda fool, shit
If I were you I’d quit my day job…and go back to school bitch
Complex Illnesse, yea right…hate being the one to call you out
His moms had cow, and then went straight to the slaughter house
No notables or accolades...resume is bare and least commended
I throw mirage of punches...while his was never there to begin with
but I’ll just end it...too busy laughing at the lines you wrote yourself
guess I’ll cut this bitch some slack... before he chokes to death

Nice As Drop feelin It 9/10 Nice Vocab..

Winner..Mr

complex verse was blah...nothing good whatsoever. Ive peeped Mr's stuff on original & normally comes awesome,. here u werent but u did enuff.

And yea I peeped ya sig…spellings awful, u some kinda fool, shit
If I were you I’d quit my day job…and go back to school bitch
but I’ll just end it...too busy laughing at the lines you wrote yourself
guess I’ll cut this bitch some slack... before he chokes to death
^just made me laugh

Vote. Mr W Rite

Complex: I Wasnt Really Feeling Your Verse...It Was Kinda Basic...HaHa...Name Is Complex Rhymes Is Basic Blah! You Get It...Anyways...I Think You Could Have Done Better...You Had Some Decent Punches But None Really Hit That Hard...You Came Pretty Weak...The Structure Was Really Good Though...You Could Have Used Personals Maybe It Would Have Been Better....No W/P No Multies...Pretty Much A Basic Verse

Overall : 5/10

Mr W Rite:

You Had Some Pretty Good Personals...The One About His Sig...And The Ones ABout His Name Were Good...Your Punches Were Decent Also...Better Than Complex's Punches But Not Hott Just Better Than His....Good Vocab...Good Structure...Decent Verse

Overall : 7/10

Vote: Mr W Rite

~!1!~

Illnesse? a i spell very bad dogg unless the was on purpose to do that

Complex Illnesse, yea right…hate being the one to call you out
His moms had cow, and then went straight to the slaughter house
No notables or accolades...resume is bare and least commended
I throw mirage of punches...while his was never there to begin with

-enough to take this in my eyes

CI just sucked really bad

v) W.Rite

Complex
Yo im a Big dogg sikk and left for u is only Clues
Mr W.rite u are right about something dogg youre gonna lose
7/10..ok, good play off his name
Now thats some Great news im slaughtering this fag
Nigga be for real i hold more wins than a Grocery Bag
3/10...doesnt make sense
You leared multiplecation in school u kno 2+2 at least
So dumb battle 2 people jpoll said 20 lines max he said 12 a Peice
wtf are u talkin about? 3/10...
Dont u GEt it im gonna kill ya fake ass dispose of ur whackness
Punches Personals and flow whoa look back-miss,look at all u realli lack-this
6/10...blah!
Might have some werid shit but dogg and u better Grin-u-bitch
The best punch you got on me is if i Move-In-To-IT
6/10...gay.
overall - 5/10...wack.

Mr W.rite
Im still killin these newb bitches, still got fans in waves of bunches
He’s still a loser, still wack and for christ sake still explainin punches
7/10...lol, and the punches were wack as fuck
And yea I peeped ya sig…spellings awful, u some kinda fool, shit
If I were you I’d quit my day job…and go back to school bitch
6/10..no, weak
Complex Illnesse, yea right…hate being the one to call you out
His moms had cow, and then went straight to the slaughter house
6.5/10...ok
No notables or accolades...resume is bare and least commended
I throw mirage of punches...while his was never there to begin with
7/10...good punch
but I’ll just end it...too busy laughing at the lines you wrote yourself
guess I’ll cut this bitch some slack... before he chokes to death
6/10...weak closer
overall - 6.5....u didnt need much
v/Mr W.rite