pictureperfect2 vs LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1
yo yo 10 - 16 lines.........no hate, d/r, all that shit..........check in due 45 min afta check in.......ill check in afta u then start keyin.....dont no show
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Pictureperfect no more cuz u just got a loss/
You just anotha path that is easily crossed/ Why the fuck you have tupac as ur avatar wen u got no game man/ You live a thug life than why have high speed internet and broadband/ Just a rich as fag that wunts to be like the crowd/ Prolly goes to Harvard...making father proud/ Well bitch where im from we dont got dads n we provide fer our family/ Im tellin it real so i wont rhyme cuz i gotta express this to ya/ So stop posin dawg cuz u just aint "ThUg LiFe"/ Haha this cat wont have sex til he gets a wife GOOD LUCK |
Spittin rhymes inclined
to take u back in time yo mom gives birth she say da child aint mine/ jus another verse I know it hurts lazy fuck gave up before beginning the search/ so les fast forward to when u was a kid and see how u was way back when/ u was funny looking as we look back hooked ass beeck wit a hooked ass back aww am I makin u sad heleriosly ironic u sumin u never had one stick this pussy bleedin my dick he slurpin seaman to go on I see no reason beat me keep on dreamin |
Lyrically definitly got this. No real challenge here. Picture had some tight metas and punches. Picture didn't really throw anything, more of a freestyle verse than a battle I think.
Please check this out, both of yall. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded |
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Lyrically Insane took this one easily, he came with nice structure and really good punches, "You live a thug life than why you have high speed internet and broadband"
that shit had me laughing, good job. Pictureperfect keep working at it, your lines were short and choppy. vote: LyricallyInsane1 hey guys please drop an honest vote, this kid talks shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110243 |
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LI... your structure prolly is wut i think killed you da most... i think you had da lyrics... but you really didn't catch da rythm of da flow... punches were ok.. not anything to stand out-ish.. overall not to bad tho... out of 10 i give you 7.3-- <---structure---> PP.. pretty good... i like how you tried to keep ppl reading with a lil intencity...... punches were a lil better... good structure.. easy to read and get your text style... good job.. out of 10 i give you an 8.3 Vote: Perfect |
uppin..........yo peep what blak woods had ta say if u votin.......sumone who actually understood a bit how i be flowin, and flow dro dat flow u thought was hot by dat doo, is not coo at all. fo real when u look at it, i'd be inbarrased makin a slam from someones computer, das jus gay.............uppin.......................
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LI got this, but you two need to elevate a lot, both of you had a lot of things that didn't make sense, LI had more of a flow, and used more wordplay, and metas, but they didn't really make sense, i bet if you guys tried harder you could do a lot better, your flow was a little odd.
Both of your structures were fucked up. Pic I thought was tied with creativity when he said the whole thing about the beginning of LI's life, but LI said: You live a thug life than why have high speed internet and broadband/ Just a rich as fag that wunts to be like the crowd/ Prolly goes to Harvard...making father proud/ Well bitch where im from we dont got dads n we provide fer our family/ So overall LI takes this, keep elevatin Yo hit these battles, they didn't get enough votes, and have been going on for more than a week i think, so click on this link and plz vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109650 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108789 |
if u know how ta flow read mine over agian cus the whole thing flows "perfectely" so he aint beatin me in that catagory, and i appreciate your input, but lets get some cats who can actually vote, to get this thang closedandone .
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