::...Talk About Talent...::
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191207

Woooooooooooooooo Serious...Quick 16

Keys Touched........Hands Caress Em......Fingers Give Birth 2 Words
Flirt Wit Different 'LIMBS OF EXPLANATION'.........U Dictionary Herbs!
Have No Lives Beyond This..............Half Look Weak I'm Astonished
Nigga Got Da 'Possesiveness'.......To Make Da Devil Look Harmless!
Throw Tarnage, At Me? I'm Tossin Back Gay Assassins So Get Happi
Faggets Diss Me, I'll Send Em 'PICK-UP-LINES' For Tryna Get At Me!
Wordplay Ya Shine...I Smother Cocks Wit Ex-Lax & Make Dicks Run!
Go Get Guns..Blast At Brains Til Ya 'SENSE-HALF' Like 50 Cents Son!
If I Gotta Grip Heads.......My Hands Reflection.......Will Mirror Ya Hair
I Admit I Ain Fair, Cuz I'm 'POPPIN-HIGH'.......Like Pussies In Da Air!
Tell Me About Myself, YES I Enjoy It.....................Ack's Kinda Cocky
Pay 4 Falls Or U'll Drop Free, Then 'K-K-K' Any Nigga Ina WHITE-TEE
Aeyo Thats My Bitch!, Yep...........Da One U Call Wifey, She Pipes Me
I Get More Fun Outta 'STRAPIN-SPINES'.......Like A Belts-Behind Me!
Since U Gotta Cum-Hard.....Ya Erections In Job Lines......Just Waitin
Nut....Watch Ya Eyes 'BUST-SHORTER' Than Pre-Mature Ejaculation!


Jeah...Talk About Talent!


(1) 50 Cent's Son.....LIL'50.....He's HALF His Sense.....Connect Da Dots

Da Fuck....Say Somethin You Lettin It Go Down 2 Da Boondocks Already.....SMH

ite here we go,

not bad but some of the ppunches were a bit meh, flowed well for the most part, few played concepts, but for a quick drop i was feelin it a lot mayne, nice shit..

now go drop in our battle, i already did!

damn you Ack...why r u so damn good...some punches were meh but overall the verse was sick...like TB lol....or maybe chicken pox...that's always bad...where was I? oh yeah nice shit man...8.5/10...rtf on anything i got lol

p.s. sry bout our collab...personal probs..damn females stressin me lol....

Jeah @ Daubs I Got You Son.................................Aha @ L.F.S. No Problem Nigga I Aint Write Mines Either Lol

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this was aight, some decent concepts..
bit stretched which takes away from the effectivness
of your punches, add multi's for flow or shorten ya lines...
but dont get me wrong it was aight........

Jeah Dis Shit Was Real Quick........I Only Spent Like 10 Mins On It No Lie

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Ack Nice Flow!Some Punches Were Nice N Some Were Basic!Liked Da 50 Cent line Man!LoL!Flow Was nice!Structure Was Kind of OFF!but Nice Shyt Man!Honest!8/10 Holla Atcha boy!

Jeah Da Structure Was Off.........It Was Quick As Fuck But I'm Glad You Feelin It

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no doubt your talented.........nice lil piece, some punches were good, some were not so good but a nice drop anyway....keep doing it fam

I was feelin tha multies. Nice verse. This was a nice drop. I think there couldve been more, but w/e, Nice quick dope shit. 7/10 for me..


Check out my OM....Livin' Large...

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Good Looks M-Eazy, Mizz & Bone.............Feelin Ya Feedback About Da Punches Lol Now Dat I Read Em They Coulda Been Betta

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