dutch vs Kirk
 

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6 - 12 lines
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Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 04-05-08 at 06:19 PM

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dutch has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-08 07:56 AM.

i'm on top.. you just the MIDDLE OF FAME
dude couldnt "sun me"(son me) if the KID WAS A FLAME!! 1
have him "hit man" but this aint VIDEO GAMEZ!!
dont even know wut he 'hit-by' dudes 'spits-dry' like SKIDDLEZ IN RAIN!! 2
i'm bout tah be MORE DORMANT..PSYKE!! have the FOURS SCORCHIN DYKEZ
this "dude hammered" like THOR STORIN MIGHT!! 3
he SO BORIN RIGHT??
got his "shots stopped" like a WHOLE WAR IN STRIKE!! 4
when i DECIDE TAH BURST EIGHT.. he'll DIE THE WORST WAY
or be "runnin home" like this GUYS AT THIRD BASE!! 5
got him "all pinned"(pin doll) flip that and he wonderin WHY THE CURSE STAYZ!!
just call it "easy pickin" like a FLYIN BIRD HAZE!! 6

Kirk has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-08 12:06 PM.

I'll leave this bitch with a red neck when he's comin' to pound me,
You think you can really git er' done but I'm still wonderin' 'how d?'
They say behind every great man is a great woman, well since this is true,
Please, tell this dude to get the fuck outta my way when I'm dissin' you,
My shit is blowin' your mind, you're showin' a sign of tryna think sir,
You tryna grab the win, but that shits slippin' right through your fingers,
Dude thinks hes a perfectionist, well that ideal will crush him much faster,
Gettin' smaller the more I smokin him is the only thing that Dutch Masters,
Tryna get your foot in the door of the rap game, well thats an obstacle,
Cause when I drop my verse and defeat you, how will that be possible?
And in this life you think you'll make it, my lines will severe every man,
This bitch must be livin' in a dream world though, his punches never-never land.

nice much respect and good luck'

Uppin', i'll rtf........................................

Voted For: Kirk

Flow: K
Punches: Tie
Wordplay: K (orignailty was just better and not so forced)
Overal: K

Dutch came with a good versus, but it wasn't nearly as smooth as Kirk's...


return the favor in my 2 battles, thanks

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Unexplained vote removed

Lol at tie for punches. Battle me..................

ok, dont return the favor you fucking flame.........

Voted For: Kirk

you win your verse was much better and smoother....dutch...your style has been used to much its overrated......and seems bit just like your verse in the cypher.....LOL

Voted For: Kirk

good battle on both parts, but my vote definitely goes to kirk,

He had the better rhyme scheme, better looking verse, and better punches - such as...


Dude thinks hes a perfectionist, well that ideal will crush him much faster,
Gettin' smaller the more I smokin him is the only thing that Dutch Masters,

haa that shit had me literally lol

Dutch, i guess what really detracted myself from your verse was the fact you had to number your punches. Please dont do that ever again.

For obvious reasons, my vote goes to kirk

Thanks guy.. uppin' and shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit.

Voted For: Kirk

And in this life you think you'll make it, my lines will severe every man,
This bitch must be livin' in a dream world though, his punches never-never land.
Dude thinks hes a perfectionist, well that ideal will crush him much faster,
Gettin' smaller the more I smokin him is the only thing that Dutch Masters,

vs

nothing

one sided battle.
v/Kirk


Unexplained vote removed

oh shit, man i aint think you beat me let alone blow me out but its cool keep it 100