Life Is to the Juicy Beat
 

This is prolly one of the best tracks i've done in a while....check it out...its pretty tight...

www.soundclick.com/jayjking its the Life Is song...

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=163718

Uppin this is crazy.....

lyrically it was weak... you were prolly vibin with the beat.. and i can since that.. but you werent sayin shit for real.. well you were.. but you said it wrong.. work on your lyrics.. the most.... flow was cool.. quality was ehh.. it wasent bad.. but it wasent clear.. keep droppin tho.. -1

ok....how aint i saying it right????

i meant.. your wording in your verses... the way you said the shit, didnt get you the effect it could have if said in a different way.. you know.. how u spit something matters alot

iight i'll redo it ......right now

nooooo lol.. i aint mean for u to redo it fam.. i just meant.. practice on your story tellin aspects of your spits and how you want things to come across to your audience.. iunno fam its just my opinion and wha ti thought about it.. aint nuffin wrong wif it mayne.. just keep droppin -1

well i just did and the presense is there now..its good now....

Its not up on SC yet..i'll tell you when i change it...

damn son...u messin up a good beat fa real...ya lyrics need improvement..ya beat is way to fuckin loud..and the way u flowed...didnt really go like it should..simple rhymin....maybe re do it..and put some more effort in it..turn the beat down...ya quality is pretty good tho..the wya you can fix the flow on this is write MORE in ya bars...so u wont stop after every line...

only been rappin on beats for 2 months....so how bout that this is my second month.....and i'm only 15 please

you got time mayne.. aint no rush.. just get comfortable on the mic man

You think i'm good for a 15 year old wit only two months of recording under his belt...