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Speek.E.Z. 02-17-04 03:10 AM

I bought her a vibrator Part 2
 
If your only allowed one piece a day close this one, the other one is better..

Now That I'm Single..

I Need A Bitch That Cooks And Cleans, A Special Someone For Me To Demean..
A Hot Bitch That Is Heard Not Seen, And Is Always Up For A Good Double Team..
Know What I Mean A Special Girl That Likes To Do Other Things On Her Knees..
Then Just Scrub The Floors, And When I Ask For Sex, She Has To Say Cracka Please..
Now A Girl Like This You Can’t Find With Ease, So I Write This As My Special Ad..
This Bitch Must Also Be Bad, And Better Make Sure That Those Tits Don’t Sag..
And You Better Not Be Mad, If I Bring Home Another Chick To Fuck In The Ass..
Because She Will Pass, And I Will Need A Bitch After With Some Sort Of Class..
So That Means No White Trash, I Just Wants A Bitch Who Will Fuck Me In My Caddy..
And The Last Thing To Know Is That If You Get Pregnant, I Won’t Be The Daddy..

- k ! L L z - 02-17-04 03:24 AM

ehh. Your flow could Use Mad Work. The Structure tho, is Good.
Pretty funny. But you Know as well as I do that this SubJect Is Played.
Nice Over-all Lil flow. I guess. I think anyone could have wrote this Shit.
I'm Not hating. I just think you Could Prolly Do Much Better.

Speek.E.Z. 02-17-04 03:27 AM

u have to read the first one to get this one, and this is to lighten open mic up a bit.. its to depressing.. read it as a joke, im not serious with this open mic..

inspire 02-17-04 03:31 AM

I consider this a waste of my time to read.. =P

Topic = wack.. Perhaps if you made this an audio or something, but that's been done a million times.. ( e.g. Rags - Stick It In Your Mouth - www.soundclick.com/chubbyfacedhustla )

Flow was ok I guess, but it doesn't really matter unless you get someone interested in the topic, this also has nothing to do with a vibrator lol.. So why did you name it this?

Get better. pz

MethodZ 02-17-04 03:32 AM

flow was shitty, dragged on too long
i like this concept ;)
u got a giggle out of me..
collab with me for part 3 :D

Pz, keep up the sexyness ryan

Speek.E.Z. 02-17-04 03:54 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by inspire
I consider this a waste of my time to read.. =P

Topic = wack.. Perhaps if you made this an audio or something, but that's been done a million times.. ( e.g. Rags - Stick It In Your Mouth - www.soundclick.com/chubbyfacedhustla )

Flow was ok I guess, but it doesn't really matter unless you get someone interested in the topic, this also has nothing to do with a vibrator lol.. So why did you name it this?

Get better. pz

if you read i gave her a vibrator pt1, u would realize that this guy was dumped by his gf for her vibrator.. so this is his ad for love ;)

Tyler Durden 02-17-04 03:57 AM

Lmao..funny ass shit...
Liked tha knees one
And all of it was funny
But flow was too long

..get at me for part 3

Speek.E.Z. 02-17-04 04:17 AM

part 3 will be good :)

ELEETE 02-17-04 08:17 AM

:laugh: This was a funny ass spin off man!! Shit was good! Flow was bit long but the shit was too funny for me to stop the read..........Anyway Hit me up for part 3!! After all I was the inspiration for this! :thumbup:


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