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restricted vs. gambino
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battles go up monday check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse forced words must be bolded or something so people can see them bar limits: 16 bar min. 32 bar max. forced words you must use these in your battle verse or be d'q: poverty,executive,enhance,international |
ceckin' in..................
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Yo...Yo...
Checking In Dis.. Holla At Your Boi!! ~R~ |
Here Are My Three Voting Links For This Week..
.:Vote #1:. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117539 .:Vote #2:. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117538 .:Vote #3:. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117543 ~R~ |
whats good........
Yall should watch this cause i'm about to merc this man NEXT// cause i got more tight shit in my rhymes than a whole store of SPANDEX// but like air force ones i'm about to CHECK-YOU-KID// cause your rhymes are more broke than an enron EXEC-U-TIVE// and your more of a bitch than a man so your GENDER'S IRRATIONAL// and to you punchlines are foreign so you can say i'm INTERNATIONAL// so dog you should enhance ya rhymes cause in this league i'm the SLEEPA// and this battles like a one night stand cause i'll fuck ya then LEAVE-YA// and after the battle you'll need a saivior so on your movie list CIRCLE the PASSION// cause I kill niggas with words so you could say I'm a VERBAL ASSASIN// and I cant belive you battling so you must be kinda stupid or DENCE// and you like a pour man in poverty cause you aint got no SENCE// restricted the type of cat to pick up a dirty bitch and give her a KISS// cause the only hot shit about this nigga is when he taking a PISS// and how he gonna fuck with a nigga from this crhyme sindicate GROUP// cause this bitch sucks more than a crack head on a jersey front step STOOP// see everyones on your dick cause you 9-0 so they like HE-SICK-KID// but the truth is that I'm about to leave this nigga stuck and RE-STRIC-TED// and i'm folk so I hate bloods so i'm like a bull cause when i see you i see MORE-RED// and i'll leave ya like you from india and put a red dot on your FORE-HEAD// and you can cheat if you want cause to beat me you gotta do what you MUST// cause your rhymes are so old they like shelves they startin' to collect DUST// and dog your performance is so bad this sites gonna have pour ATTENDANCE// and you like niggas on parole you gonna be done before the end of your SENTENCE// and if you think you gonna be famous well dog you can't even SPIT// cause you rappin' is like playn' baseball with no bat you could never git a HIT// and you like a christian rapper tryna act like a gangsta or a thug// but that's ok cause nigga i'll baptis you in a pool of your own BLOOD// and this is your death dog so I guess i'll be seeing you in HELL// cause i'll put cheese in my clip and start feedin' you SHELLS// and I dont give a fuck about this battle so you can quote me on THIS// cause I'm sorry restricted but that nigga MIC-WRECKER had me PIST// yo that's it so holla and vote........... one love....... I got all the forced words in too......... |
your turn..........................
one love......... |
when ever you ready dog................................
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Aiyo..
Aight...Check...
3......2......1..... :gfy: Yo.... Re$tricted Spits Bars Out Left and Right, Like I Was Playing Ukor, Aces, Kings, and Jacks, I Think The Queen Of Hearts Would Betta Suit Ya/ Your Name Is Fitting, Cause Right Now Your Gambling With Ya Life-Line, Intise-Mine, Getting Hit Quik, Scared Bitch, Fagget You Lack-Spine/ Next Time You Try To Pull-Weight, Like Beyonce, Please Lose Ya Pot-Belly, I Rock Steady, Lyrical Shards Slicing, Ya Needing Band-A.I.D.S. Like St.Nelly/ They've Awarded The Lyrical Champ Already, Man This Award Is Getting Heavy, Like The Simpsons,I'll Hit'N'Run, This Cats A Toys'R'Us Kid Like R-Kelly/ *G*uilty *A*ccused, *M*entally *B*isected, *I*nsest *N*mphyo *O*verRated, Ya Baby-Boys Eyes Cock-Eyed, Just Like Ya Style, Ya Shits Out-Dated/ This Battle Is One-Sided Like I Was Battleing A One-Legged Kid On A Kickstand, You Ain't Ever Going To Be Hot, Trust In Re$tricted, You Won't Need Any Fans/ Sometimes I Feel Like I Got A Clone,When I Say Bomb, Gambino Says Blown, Get Off My Dick, Shit, He'll Prolly Copy-N-Paste My Verse and Say Its His Own/ :thefinger You Get Scorched In A Flash, Tied Up, Tortured and Bashed, Beat Down and Stomped Through The Ground Till Ya Vital Organs Are Smashed!/ I'm the Lord of This Craft, Performin Lyrical Wizadry Without A Sorcerors Staff, When It Comes To Flexin Skill, Gambino is As Ill As A Tortoise is Fast!/ Your Skills In-Debt, Thats Why You Rappin Poverty, Re$tricteds International Greatness, Let Me Re-Write Ya Verse, Enhace Every Aspect, This Kids Executive Is Now Fate-Blessed/ *****Flow Changes....****** Must Be Jackin With Glue The Way You Stuck To Yourself, Thinkin Your Hardshit, Couldnt Blow Dust Off A Shelf/ Flow Must Off This Elf The Way I'm Killin You Shortly, Watch Me Judge the Facts Like This Battle Was Courtly/ Sticking A Dildo In 2 Stuffed Cats, Is The Only Time You Fuck Like A Trinity, The Possibility's To This Is Infinity, The Only Time You Experianced Divinity, Is When Ya Dad Took Ya Virginity/ :hump: Ya Flow Is Ass and Tail, Yep I Say The Darndest Things, I’ll Spark-N-Bling With The Bars-I-Sling, Against The Hardest-You-Bring, My Flow Scar-N-Sting, Verbal Like Sars-In-Spring Sneezin While You Garglin-Cream/ :spit: I Type Inadequate Cuz I'm Past-Ya-Match, I’ll Blast Ya Stats, Rip’em Apart, Then Pass Them Back, Imagine That, I Layed Ya Ass Flat, Matter Fact, Fuck This Battle, And That’s A Rap/ Haha....Yea....Round 3? Man I Can't Be Stopped..HaHa... ~R~ |
Didn't Have Ne Idea His Verse Had Dust and Shelf In It...You Can Ask Gambino Himself....I Was Asking Him Yesterday To Make Up His Verse So I Could Drop Mine......
Sincerly No Idea, But Besides That Lets Get The Votes In.. ~R~ |
yeah its cool! about the dust and shelf thing..........
so lets git some votes............ one love.......... |
breakdown for gambino:
flow:nice job you really stepped it up from last week 7/10 volcab:solid use here too really this was a great verse 7/10 punches:nice personals some played topics like the enron line i've seen shit like that on other sites but my fav,"cause i got more tight shit in my rhymes than a whole store of SPANDEX//" funny shit. good job 7/10 overall:21/30 well rounded verse you've improved from last week breakdown for restricted: flow:nice use of mutlis through out the peice some of the bars got huge so without those mutlis this flow would of been wack alright though 7/10 volcab:nice best i've read in the league this week 9/10 punches:with the exception of the first bar rhyming bout yourself which i always thought was a battle no no, good job my fav,"Must Be Jackin With Glue The Way You Stuck To Yourself, Thinkin Your Hardshit, Couldnt Blow Dust Off A Shelf/" i'm not sure bout the feeding off his verse you said and he said it's alright so anyway best line 8/10 overall:24/30 flow,volcab punches it was all on this week vote--restricted close the multis and volcab use really what pulled him into the lead |
wow gambino you stepped up alot you had some decent lines compar ed to what i have seen from you before im not really feeling the way you put your words in caps like that it seems as if your trying to hard to get the people to understand what your saying
multis4/10 structre2/10 flow 5/10 punches 5/10 Re$tricted Re$tricted you a sick bastard but anyways this wasnt like last weeks by any means im a lil upset you slacked off on gambino but came at me crazy but anyways nice multis good flow decent punches nice metaphors multis 8/10 structure 7/10 flow 8/10 punches 7/10 v-Re$tricted "don't get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me" Krackmittens |
Aight 2-0
Respect All Votes... Good Battle Gambino, You Did Step It Up.. Uppin Dis Ish. ~R~ |
dis shit was easly won by re$tricted betta punches betta words betta lines betta eirthing and he get my vote
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you dont have 10 post playa..........
and you didn't explaine very welll............ |
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