illiance VS Ameen
 

Aight...

10 lines.

Drop in 20 mins.

No bullshit.

Peace.

Yo, better make it known, these MC's that i'm KILLIN//
Coz people need my ryhmes like diabetics need INCILLIN//
You must have epilepsy, b-coz you throwin a FIT//
It must be my verbal style and my natural WIT//
My ryhmes speak for me, i get chicks all over this LAND//
The only 'ILLIANCE' you be makin, is with your RIGHT~HAND//
Beat a battler once, then he's scraed to INCREASE~HIS~TONE//
I take my Lyriks-of-Wisdom" and tell them to FETCH~THA~BONE//
People shut there doors, whenever i COME~TO~ROAM//
I tear apart your lyrics, you gunna need them FIXED~N~SEWN//

please vote on the battles in my sig.....peace

I've made a good "deal" yo I'm gonna "make a killin,"
You out-your-depth like a vietnameese amputee swimmin',
You battle me you willin' to pay I'm burn-ya-balls,
Throw a cheque out tha window but you'll never drop a "personal",
You just can't see me like Gorilla's-in-the-mist,
And your punches are jus' soft like you got pillows-on-your-fists,
Yo I don't mind gay's you won't "beat me" despite your best,
Your like Mr.Muscle - no skills or talent jus a lycra vest,
My rhymes get up inside ya, irrate jus like a splinter,
You can't beat this, unlike your dad's cock - you've jus never had it in ya!

done...

so...drop any feedback and links and i'll vote back on urs.

peace

ye same here......if you vote on this, i'll vote on yours

thanx

Vote=Ameen

Had good flow,structure,& decent punches.Illiance ok structure,and ok flow,but your punches could have been harder.They just wasn't hard as Ameen.

VOTE ON MY DAMN BATTLES,I did take time to read this shit

this was a real close one, but i think my vote goes to illiance, in all he just came harder and had better rhymes, he seemed like he was more into it.

vote - illiance

i felt that he had the better punches n the better personals flow n structure

but like i always say the winna is tha 1 who elevates

drop a vote on this link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335

.................................................. .uppin

Opener - Illiance (both could've been better)
Closer - Illiance (hit harder)
Structure - Ameen
Flow - Ameen
Punches - Illiance
Metas - Illiance
Personals - None

OVERALL - Illiance

Decent battle.. though Illiance definately threw more and harder punches.. Ameen you've got nice flow and structure, just work on gettin' it to hit harder.. Much respect..

one~

Also, could I get a vote or 2? Links in the sig.. Thanks

illliance took this one... but ameen werent a bad flow.. he got it going on but ya missed out on tha punches

Ameen won this one....He had a better structure and his rhymes were going together much better. I liked his flow and he had that one personal about ill's right hand. Had me weak....

Vote - Ameen

Vote on these:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134177

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134111

Would Have Liked To See SOme More Personals..Didn't See Any.

Ameen - Nice Flow Man i Like Your Structure And Kept Up Some Pretty Good Punches.
Nice Alliance With The Hand HaHa Kinda Played Out THough.

Illiance- Ok Flow A Little Weak On The Rhymes And Structure. A Few Good Metas.


Vote - Ameen

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134161

-eB

Good battle first off.

Illiance
Nice punches. Great metiphores' along witta few good personal's.
Overall you had a pretty nice verse. Not much to improve on really.
Just keep up the ahrd punches.
Ameen
Also. Nice drop. Not a big fan of Cap'in your punches. We get the point. Your punches were OK. The one thing I noticed is your Metiphores. They were good. However they seeme'd a little bit forced at time. Good originalty just work on making things flo a little better into each other. Again, good Job.
This was a close on but...
Vote/Illiance
Hit up the Battles' in my Sig Wit Honest Votes. Thanks.

not even a close battle... whats wrong with you ppl ?


ameen:

punches:3
personals:0
creativity:3
structure:2
vocab:3
flow:2

illiance:

punches:7
personals:5
creativity:7
structure:6
vocab:7
flow:6

clearly not a close battle,

vote: illiance, better flow, struct... erything, ameen just came wack

illiance i feel sorry for you, those ppl voting for the person who was clearly wack, instead of you, good luck

vote: illiance

return the favor, battle is in my sig, hit it up