I teach u to flow, Grasshopper
I got some bitch back to the house
Rappin, Back and, forth from the cat to the mouse Its her turn, she lifts the heater, the fifths defeat her A mild but black blunt, she swears the swishers sweeter Shotgun smoke, I kiss the diva And once she hits the reefer the beast evolves Suckin, spit greased the balls Funny thats what she least recalls So I treat her like a liar, try to buy her Love from Kani to Mya, saw her tyke admire Me, and knew he'd grow to be the type of minor That got skills right but tryin'a, fight for China He'd go crazy, days evolved Into the shit that Jay-Z carved In rhymes at times spiritual In the land of the man he came from to chuck a spear at u Like he dont hear what u, say, like that'd matter He wanted to batter dad or, grab a vat of The illest to fill his cup and come out a bladder He had a gat up, in the closet Sittin next to a couple bucks in deposits Puffin hard shit, an arsenic mix, of course it hits But makin him more sick its, some sort of morbid fix Hard to nix, needle pulled back, the blood drawed to mix Shit still swirlin push back, no clot to which Could clog the veins and arterries that the heart connects |
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hmm, structures off, you got good vocab
i dont get why you dont take an extra 5 min and work on some of your concepts... their there, maybe you just not seeing them? non the less, put more effort into your om's and you'll get positive feedback..... just try n keep ya shit even n not so choppy.pz |
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