RapVerse.com Community - aiight, check this ish out

This is my verse in an actual song I'm gonna record pretty soon. Let me kno what you think. Here's the beat we usin':http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down...g.cfm?ID=607254

When I fly solo, I always carry a gun
A GAT or a 9-mili, I have my own fun
If niggas wanna front, I say, “Bring it on
But first, hold on. I gotta finish this fuckin’ song”
You’re such a pussy, you prolly still sleep in a nursery
If you fuck wit me, you’ll be sleepin’ through surgery
You couldn’t touch me, fuck Duke University
Cuz you’re currently tied up, dukin’ wit adversity
It be the anniversary, of you hearin’ the sound
Of bullets poppin’ through yo window, nigga, knockin’ you down
I’ll track yo ass down, like I be a blood hound
When I’m up front… you kno I’m gonna pound
I go from club to club, like I got ADD
Yea, I fuck a lot, but I got no HIV
You kno I’m one a’ the best, so ya betta bring yo vest
Or I’ll shut you up straight, like a pirate's treasure chest (yo, yo)