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LIGHTWEIGHT: Stanza >vs< H-N-I-C >vs< Daubs
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa. Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Drakel or Drama Queen or Sokaris). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. If you dont ask for an extention, and drop whenever you feel like it you will be disqualified. Do not abuse extentions, they are not to be used if you're just too lazy to drop within the confines of the circumstances. Leave reasonable explanation for your absense. If the League notices you are a slacker due to this nature you will be banned for being out-right slothfully callous. Don't ho-show because you will be banned if you do it twice. We can understand you cannot drop due to certain circumstances but if this happens a second time, you're banned from the league for 2 weeks. If you signed up for both leagues and you no-show in one league twice, you will be banned in both leagues! Try to limit the freeposts, we will have a chat/beef thread for that. Also give fully explained votes, if not your votes won't count! New rule: first to get 3 votes wins by KO TOPIC: ode to the uncivilized |
Check.................
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What's tha topic???
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^word.
and check. |
Checkin IN ...........Yeah Plz Dont 4Get Our Topic
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i had to let all of you checkin in first...
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Oh Ok an Also *Hate to Freepost* But Im not on The Rankings My Old Rankin B4 I Left Was 4-0 or 3-0 But I Was Undefated Though
Make Sure you put up my Rank So I Can Be up for my title match and not have to start my rank all over :thumbup: Thanx |
Ode To The Uncivilized They Walk With a Limp And They Talk With Disrespect They Wave Their Knives, Drugs, Ozies And Techs But This is My Ode To The Uncivilized Because They Made me Who I am When They Kill, Steal, Sceme & Scope and they Do It so Damn Good That They forget thier Basic Morals for Life They Remeber Their Guns to battle and a Knife to Fight Living off & WUth The Streets Just To Build Up a Rep Making The News for Leaving another Victim dead on The step Makes Them Smile to see that they earn to Wear Red or Blue Scared Of Who? Not You...Becuase theyll Leave You Dead Without a Clue Silently Creeping Just to gain Fear Instead Of Earning Respect Shooting up The Schools All Because someone called them a Reject? A Reject to Society And a Moral Menis to The Town Unsafe To Walk Alone Because Many Want to See them Down Not Down in The Spirit or Down Iin The Soul Down In The Pits Where Their Bodies Will Mold From Dying Young Instead of Trying to Live old The Story Of Their Lives Have Not Yet To Be Told From Life & Hope, Peace, Wellness, & Charity They Have been Deprived I Hate to Talk about Them But This is My Ode' To The Uncivilized Goodluck Famz :thumbup: |
As not to hoe show...
..raping and luting, the manor of vikings.. ..no dignity, problems solved by fighting.. ..illeterate then dislexic, no future hope.. ..hhilds the victims, how can they cope.. ..hair is wild, as windy forcefields prevail.. ..the suffering unmeasurable by anyscale.. ..cracked flesh, overused then corroded.. ..calm has no meaning, angers explosive.. |
C'mon R.A.W in this BITCH
Sex, Murder and Mayhem, Romance for tha streets We feed this to tha people for this is what they like to eat Naked Photographs, and pornography sells out in stores Crips, Bloods and U.S. soldiers are all engaged in wars Civilians losing their lives...they call it "Collateral Damage" Billionaires rebuke tha poor...yet some how they manage Racism lives on but we try and pay it no mind Until we see sories of Emmit Till on tha 10:00 primetime This is considered civilized to many....but not to me So to the entire human race.....THIS IS MY ODE TO THEE |
V/Daubs-the reason i voted for him is because i saw WAY better Metaphores in his little verse than i did any of the rest........he had ALOT more abstract thinking in his verse and when i thought about them it all came togeather perfectly....but regaurd less ALL of yall should be proud of ur drops but daubs i felt was jsut better....
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V/ - Daubs
like lyricalsolja siad........he had more abstract thinking in his poem, more metaphors and to me his was the only piece that actually seemed like a poetry piece to me....the other two seemed more like a cross of poetry and topical writing.......daubs was the only one who came with pure poetic writing so he gets my vote..... |
also vote is DAUBS, bieng that he showed more emotion. short piece, but still a very good imagery bieng placed. the structure was good. he had some great vocabulary. he has a very good way with the poetic side. my vote is DAUBS
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I dont even have to explain
V/daubs for the reasons ^^ he said............... |
Long week :cool:
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