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Natural killa vs Ghost
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No d/r No hate Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-18-05 at 08:34 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 08:37 PM.
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Ghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 08:38 PM.
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You a "Natural-Killa",but Yet if you Was To Shank Air You Couldnt even Threaten ( Mother-Nature )//
Too Bad Your Only Seen 4 dayz Of The Week,Like Da Re-Run Episodes Of -Frazier-// Schoolin Me<Naw Neva Dat Kid,how u Gon Do That If U Still A Student Learning-da-Basic// Burnin-da-Hatred,But Yet u Aint Changed,cuz u still couldnt rip me if u Bit Linez,------------------- yet Copy-n-Paste It// Im Back For the throne,only Difference kid is You Gone like Motherz With Adopted Children when they Grown// Coudlnt Conect With Punches,If u Was Physically Swingin N Make CONTACT with the Microphone// U a Killa,But hey Shyt then i guess Im A Killa In Process of BEing Late For A Hit// Cant Relate-to-my-shit,Couldnt "CUm" at me with "flow" if u were to Abbreviate With Ya CLIT// You Couldnt Compare to Me,Of My mother Verbally and Visonly Proved you Were My Blood// have Your Mind Going Balistic With The 'FLOW',like split DOME at da NEW ORLEANZ floodz// i havent did TEXT in a long azz time so cut me some slack to be exact its been 4 months since text been in my life ~1~ |
this my 1st and worst line.....and I've already passed ya,cuz
the ghost i'm battling here.....is about mean as Casper was ur always the last to buzz cos ya shit's always gon be worse,son ya skills a "chip" on the 'ol block and ya verses "hertz" none so go get ya purse 'n run,ya got no advantage to sit through cos 6 months ago,i sucked ..........and yet,I still managed to beat you!!! guarenteed....at the end of this,I'll have your pride stirred wit treason & ya texas as whack the Rangers were this season..(text-as) not without reason...so don't think I'll have ya be the last to drown cuz ur the only ghost I know that could neva elevate pass the ground Meh..... my last battle for a while ~1~ |
chea yo u still da same kid but hey u elevating a lil cuz i liked ya closer!
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This was feedback posted for Ghost
pollz, i cant help but think ive seen nat. killaz first line before...but w/e
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^^HAHA..... yea right.
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"Maybe I have one weak bar a verse, but this time my luck aint shut"-daubs
ur right, totally off but i was close lol............still kinda same concept |
Voted For: Natural killa
Ghost You a "Natural-Killa",but Yet if you Was To Shank Air You Couldnt even Threaten ( Mother-Nature )// Too Bad Your Only Seen 4 dayz Of The Week,Like Da Re-Run Episodes Of -Frazier-// Played.. Schoolin Me Burnin-da-Hatred,But Yet u Aint Changed,cuz u still couldnt rip me if u Bit Linez,------------------- yet Copy-n-Paste It// Nope.. Im Back For the throne,only Difference kid is You Gone like Motherz With Adopted Children when they Grown// Coudlnt Conect With Punches,If u Was Physically Swingin N Make CONTACT with the Microphone// Could have made the concept decent.. worded wrong though.. U a Killa,But hey Shyt then i guess Im A Killa In Process of BEing Late For A Hit// Cant Relate-to-my-shit,Couldnt "CUm" at me with "flow" if u were to Abbreviate With Ya CLIT// Played to shit.. You Couldnt Compare to Me,Of My mother Verbally and Visonly Proved you Were My Blood// have Your Mind Going Balistic With The 'FLOW',like split DOME at da NEW ORLEANZ floodz// Pretty good.. Natural Killa this my 1st and worst line.....and I've already passed ya,cuz the ghost i'm battling here.....is about mean as Casper was Decent.. ur always the last to buzz cos ya shit's always gon be worse,son ya skills a "chip" on the 'ol block and ya verses "hertz" none Pretty decent.. so go get ya purse 'n run,ya got no advantage to sit through cos 6 months ago,i sucked ..........and yet,I still managed to beat you!!! Ehh.. guarenteed....at the end of this,I'll have your pride stirred wit treason & ya texas as whack the Rangers were this season..(text-as) Concept was good, but you shouldn't have made it a baseball reference.. like, you should have done something like.. How the fuck you gonna man up? Damn, you're just a boy, kid And your Texas is so bad that even the hurricane tried to avoid it ..or something like that. not without reason...so don't think I'll have ya be the last to drown cuz ur the only ghost I know that could neva elevate pass the ground Cool.. Overall, Ghost had 1 decent punch.. whereas Natural Killa had quite a few. Natural Killa's concepts were better.. his punches hit harder.. he just had the better overall verse, so my vote goes to him. Vote - Natural Killa Both of you you should sign up for the Punchline League. It'll give you a chance to elevate without messing up your record. You should check it out. |
Voted For: Natural killa
this my 1st and worst line.....and I've already passed ya,cuz the ghost i'm battling here.....is about mean as Casper was decent, lol ur always the last to buzz cos ya shit's always gon be worse,son ya skills a "chip" on the 'ol block and ya verses "hertz" none eehh.. not feelin' so go get ya purse 'n run,ya got no advantage to sit through cos 6 months ago,i sucked ..........and yet,I still managed to beat you!!! lmao.. guarenteed....at the end of this,I'll have your pride stirred wit treason & ya texas as whack the Rangers were this season..(text-as) coulda been worded better not without reason...so don't think I'll have ya be the last to drown cuz ur the only ghost I know that could neva elevate pass the ground decent You a "Natural-Killa",but Yet if you Was To Shank Air You Couldnt even Threaten ( Mother-Nature )// Too Bad Your Only Seen 4 dayz Of The Week,Like Da Re-Run Episodes Of -Frazier-// NO Schoolin Me Burnin-da-Hatred,But Yet u Aint Changed,cuz u still couldnt rip me if u Bit Linez,------------------- yet Copy-n-Paste It// eh Im Back For the throne,only Difference kid is You Gone like Motherz With Adopted Children when they Grown// Coudlnt Conect With Punches,If u Was Physically Swingin N Make CONTACT with the Microphone// NO U a Killa,But hey Shyt then i guess Im A Killa In Process of BEing Late For A Hit// Cant Relate-to-my-shit,Couldnt "CUm" at me with "flow" if u were to Abbreviate With Ya CLIT// Played You Couldnt Compare to Me,Of My mother Verbally and Visonly Proved you Were My Blood// have Your Mind Going Balistic With The 'FLOW',like split DOME at da NEW ORLEANZ floodz// eh Ghost.. First off, you're structure sucked ass. no offense. I hate seing verses written like that cos their so hard to read. well, your punches lacked you had no personals, and your few attempts at werdplay were.. well, played. think up harder punches and better concepts next battle you have. Killa- your verse was decent with a couple ok/good lines some not as good as others aswell.. good drop. V/ Natural Killa |
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LMFAO i dont do text nomore so naw i aint gona have no more battles ~1~ and chea duecez
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