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E.C 05-22-05 06:20 AM

E.C vs Delaware
 
Battle Rules:

6 Lines (as requested)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

no hate just for fun... gd luck....

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-22-05 at 06:50 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 05-22-05 06:23 AM

E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 06:23 AM.

System 05-22-05 06:27 AM

Delaware has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 06:27 AM.

E.C 05-22-05 06:37 AM

like cheer leader wit tassles, you jump and do the splits in the air,
you cross dress wit girls, he likes the type of shit that dela wears,
you could never be Phat(fat) if u worked at McDonalds serving food,
this cat likes weird things, like watching forskins bein chopped off jews,
i'm not gonna be rude but this kids childish, still sucking his mummy,
still not elevated since u started try reading the rap book for dummies,

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_Explanations_

1st bar: Name play "delaware" "dela wears"
2nd bar: macdonals fat "phat" is good


thats it just a quick key...

hope u like :thumbup:

13th. 05-22-05 06:42 AM

Took Em as his Figure head, just to keep him mentally insane……
Asked all us UK heads to battle, ‘Yo lads an easy win to gain’……
How the hell u get in The Establishment, I thought they were dope…
I’ve give u enough , bitch will hang him self with my own rope*….
From da start this was unfair, cuz he be E.lderly in need of C.are….
E.C and TE jus don’t compare, by da time his read this he’ll hav no fuckin hair…..

*An old saying

If u don’t get it don’t vote :thumbup:

E.C 05-22-05 06:51 AM

good verse man... upin for votes...................

lyriclord 05-22-05 06:53 AM

Voted For: Delaware

Vote - Delaware

Delaware had better punches in his verse and it was flowing better. Both of ya'll had a good structured verse. E.C your verse was aight but i werent feelin it as much as dela's.

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E.C 05-22-05 08:44 AM

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King Solo 05-22-05 09:32 AM

This was feedback posted for E.C
 
hard to call

paradox had weak lines, one fairly good play on E.C's name

E.C on the other hand had some played concepts and nuthin overly original

if i had to pick a winner though, prolly E.C cuz he had a better play on the other persons name!!!

E.C 05-22-05 11:00 AM

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...E... 05-22-05 11:31 AM

Voted For: Delaware

so lets see.........
paradoxs:
From da start this was unfair, cuz he be E.lderly in need of C.are….
E.C and TE jus don’t compare, by da time his read this he’ll hav no fuckin hair…..
......fucking dope line.....ur best..others....good....
E.C:
like cheer leader wit tassles, you jump and do the splits in the air,
you cross dress wit girls, he likes the type of shit that dela wears,
...........good punch...never seem punch like that before..lol.....
..........still.......par get more greative punches...e.cs good too..but give vote for paradoxs

Ryan Hughes 05-22-05 12:17 PM

Voted For: Delaware

V/P.aradox.....this was a good battle Ec u came wit a good opener but it wasnt consistent from there structure a bit strechted but i felt u came to lightly....Paradox....u came wit a good verse u were consistent wit punchs an personals also structure was onpoint...NO Hate.............RETURN THE FAVOR.....
Opener=E
Closer=P
Punchs=P
Structure=P
personals=Tie
vocab=Tie
Multi's=Tie(none really)
Werdplay=Tie
Overall=P.aradox

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Bangalore 05-22-05 01:27 PM

Voted For: Delaware

overall an alright battle ... paradox u been work'n hard and its been paying off

vocab goes to paradox because he had alot better words...but i think that he coulda worked on the delievery and wordplay a little more...but still you had em with your punches and personals.. overall not a bad job.. you have been elevating alot

e.c... i could tell you did this fast... it was an alright verse.. just not up to par with paras... overall i think para got this because he had alot better wordplay and his verse was more creative...

Vote//Paradox

Kawn Flixx 05-22-05 02:38 PM

Voted For: Delaware

this was a pretty weak battle but i think paradox took this one

E.C
like cheer leader wit tassles, you jump and do the splits in the air,
you cross dress wit girls, he likes the type of shit that dela wears,
Wack opener
you could never be Phat(fat) if u worked at McDonalds serving food,
this cat likes weird things, like watching forskins bein chopped off jews,
Wack
i'm not gonna be rude but this kids childish, still sucking his mummy,
still not elevated since u started try reading the rap book for dummies,
Decent

Paradox
Took Em as his Figure head, just to keep him mentally insane……
Asked all us UK heads to battle, ‘Yo lads an easy win to gain’……
Weak opener
How the hell u get in The Establishment, I thought they were dope…
I’ve give u enough , bitch will hang him self with my own rope*….
Decent
From da start this was unfair, cuz he be E.lderly in need of C.are….
E.C and TE jus don’t compare, by da time his read this he’ll hav no fuckin hair…..
Okay multies, weak punchlines, okay closer

Overall this was a weak battle but i think paradox took this one, he came alittle harder better pucnhlines.. okay personals
overall keep it up both and elevate


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E.C 05-23-05 08:39 AM

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