Nomak.. vs Spoken Word
 

Battle Rules:

6 lines.
no crew votes.
no recycling.
no biting.
no hate.
no d/r.


first to three votes equals K.O. by accepting you agree on this..

Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 07-19-05 at 04:03 PM

Must drop verse in 55 minutes after check in.


Closed 3-0 KO

Nomak.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 03:36 PM.

Spoken Word has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 03:49 PM.

6 Lines aint really my thing i like doing more but fuck it good luck


Sorry nomak, im posting now, Cuz im a little pressed for time
This fake mc, 'Got in way over his head' like an 'entrance sign'
Im not gonna be nice, I got a wide range of artillery man
Nomak'll get 'Fed Ex' And i aint talking about a delivery van*
You knew the outcome, Why would you battle this vet
I got a deal coming soon, But you still collabing in text

1L

don't mean to be rude but - i'll simply smash you dude.
cuz the only way you steaming a-head is giving it inna boiler room.
you're weak & fragile guy - i'll crack you when you smile.
wackness for you would be a country - if it was state of mind.
my verse'll reap hell - i mean Spoken is garbage s'why he smell.
you see, i don't have to distribute computers to hand you de/ll's.

i hate explaining. but for dimshits . .
first bar = giving head - steaming ahead. you should get it.
second bar = saying if wackness was a state of mind it would be a country for him meaning bigger wackness.
last bar = de/ll's. as in DELL computers. de/the - / - ll's/L's as in loss.

Good verse lets get some votes here................

Voted For: Spoken Word

don't mean to be rude but - i'll simply smash you dude.
cuz the only way you steaming a-head is giving it inna boiler room.
Basic opener nothing big
you're weak & fragile guy - i'll crack you when you smile.
wackness for you would be a country - if it was state of mind.
Ummmm No...
my verse'll reap hell - i mean Spoken is garbage s'why he smell.
you see, i don't have to distribute computers to hand you de/ll's.Horrile Closer..

Elevate

Overall:2.3/10

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Sorry nomak, im posting now, Cuz im a little pressed for time
This fake mc, 'Got in way over his head' like an 'entrance sign'
Ight Ight...LOl..
Im not gonna be nice, I got a wide range of artillery man
Nomak'll get 'Fed Ex' And i aint talking about a delivery van*
LOL...Good Shit...
You knew the outcome, Why would you battle this vet
I got a deal coming soon, But you still collabing in text
A Bit Basic But Nice Personal

Overall:9.7/10


Vote-Spoken

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upping thanks for the vote.......................... ...........

lmao. what a hate vote. that kids been hating on me in several threads. but i'll let that slide..

Voted For: Spoken Word

don't mean to be rude but - i'll simply smash you dude.
cuz the only way you steaming a-head is giving it inna boiler room.
aight opener 6/10
you're weak & fragile guy - i'll crack you when you smile.
wackness for you would be a country - if it was state of mind.
what dont rhyme that good but nice concept 4/10
my verse'll reap hell - i mean Spoken is garbage s'why he smell.
you see, i don't have to distribute computers to hand you de/ll's.
nice closer and wordplay 8/10

VS.

Sorry nomak, im posting now, Cuz im a little pressed for time
This fake mc, 'Got in way over his head' like an 'entrance sign'
ok nice opener 6/10
Im not gonna be nice, I got a wide range of artillery man
Nomak'll get 'Fed Ex' And i aint talking about a delivery van*
kinda of played wit the fed ex 4/10
You knew the outcome, Why would you battle this vet
I got a deal coming soon, But you still collabing in text
....lol good closer 8/10

Both of u had almost the same thing nic eopener but a weak line and then a nic epunchline for the closer.....both of u did good and its very close to decide but my v/ goin to SW had a better flow to it and really thats it uz it was a close battle both had punches and wordplay went more to N but SW just had a better flow makin the verse easier to handle and read....so nice battle......v/ SW

RTF.....wit a battle..... links in my sig.....or vote gets removed...

cant rtf until i get more posts but ill do it once i post more uppin

upping this for more votes, will return the favor.

Voted For: Spoken Word

Spoken word:

What can I say man, haven't really seen you around, so I didnt really know what to expect from you. You dropped heat man. Opener was fire, meta's were dope, punches were creative, hit hard, and connected. Personals were funny and dope. Overall, a very solid verse.

Nomak:

Decent verse, but you lacked creativity. I saw much more played lines than I like to see, punches lacked, personals weren't too strong...Overall, just work on being more creative. No hate, but this wasnt a very good verse.

V/ Spoken Word

Voted For: Spoken Word

yo both had decent verses but imma have to go wit spoken word on this one, in my honest opinion.

Nmk-you had a gud verse in the way of punchlines and shit but when i was readin it, a few of the lines did seem a bit stretched.
your closer was pretty unclear as well lol, it took me a while to get that lol. but you had an aight verse

SW-yer man, you had a couple of played punchlines in there as well, but you kept a consistent flow throughout your verse which i like alot aswell as putting in half decent punchlines at the same time lol words all rhymed nicely aswell which is gud.

imma have to give dis 1 to spoken word. no hate though

Voted For: Nomak..

Flow - Nomak, was structured better, which made it flow better

Punches - Nomak, some were played by both cats, but i felt that Nomak had more and the ones he did have hit alot harder

Personals - Nomak, had alot more, and were alot better, Spoken Words's were pretty lame and didn't form together to well.. suggestion Nomak you shouldn't have to explain your personals

Multies - Obviously Nomak, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. If your a newb take a close look and you'll see.

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses



but overall i think that Nomak gets my vote!!!