Hot Sauce vs Orion.
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

30 min check
30 min drop

H.S...this is how its gonna be, if you dont accept, stay tame...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-22-05 at 02:03 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Hot Sauce has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-22-05 01:45 PM.

Orion. has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-22-05 01:46 PM.

Hot Sauce:

Opener:
A few hours early but No Mercy if Hot Sauce dares to share his worst Key,
I immersed him in my verse because I heard this nerd was thirsty,

Yo…
Kid, you aint at ma level yet, spittin enough fire to 'settle vets'
Only time you elevatin is when ya on escolators and pedal steps
My flow sends you adrift like you're shifted by it's swiftness,
Lost again... so this bitch is stricken off my Christmas gift-list,
I am a rebel, yes meanin that, you in a crew but can't really rap...
Pop out ya eyes...I guarantee it the last place you'll "see me" at
Let's see what you come back with Remember, got 60 minutes,
So that should be enough time for Hot Sauce to go find lyrics...


...owned...

in this Battle im ON TOP, " COOL AND QUITE STEADY",this BITCH IS FOOLISH and READY 2"bite another verse" ,but its NOT like he DIDNT DO IT ALREADY/for SUPPORT you'll be NEEDING CRUTCHES FRIEND ,you should find Sauce's BEST and RESORT TO STEALING PUNCHES AGAIN!

You Need to PRACTICE, VERBAL TACTICS cuz mine are known ta' WHIP WHACK SKRIPTS.. Leave ya Propellin' through the air like ur doin' ACROBATICS/My ACT IS 2 Pursue with DRASTIC ATTACK KICKS,CRACKIN UR BACK QUICK,Doin BACKFLIPS..while this styles CHIROPRACTIC/SNAPPIN HEADS n' RIBS,KILLED MANY BEFORE YOU/Your a WHORE DUDE,NOW I RECKON YOUR NEXT wit LYRICS UNDRESSIN UR NECK/ LiKE "starved vultures" IM PECKIN YA FLESH, acceptin this UR BECKONING DEATH...when im through wit u..there'll be NOTHING LEFT!(damn!)!

Sauce Holds it "down" like Gravity swingin from the TOP OF THE GLOBE actin' HOSTILE OPPOSED, only SUMMON MONSTEROUS FLOWS 2 leave emcee's APPOSTLES DISPOSED(damn!)
orion its "challengeing me"now ur +LOSIN UR HEALTH+ ...CUZ im HItten more HEARTS THAN CUPID HIMSELF+/ JUST cuz IM RUTHLESS DAWG wit little research i KNEW UR FLAWS/with ur Vocab "kids will keep shittin on you like ur "GLUED TO STALLS" (ah damn!)

Ill Finish this off by ATTACKIN UR EGO...but We Cant understand ur vocab so cuz u RAP WITH A WEAK FLOW/ You're *'Hittin-with-An-Inconsistent-Misfit' like 'Shaq-Missin-Free-Throws'*(damn)Beef is Personal,Ur Just a CONFUSED DORK...hittin ya face wit Landmarx to have more "Attractions than NEW YORK!!"

*Shaq =worst freethrow shooter in the nba

its over owned upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin

kid what are you talking about...that was a fake ass verse, coulda been used for anybody...MY NAME ISNT EVEN IN YOUR VERSE!!!

uppin for this wack ass battle.......................

Voted For: Orion.

V/Orion....this was a good battle....o he gets my vote cause he had better personals wit his punchs an his structure was easier to read....hot u had some good lines but u need to work on the structure its hard to folow u need to come wit more personals an harder diss's...No Hate...RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=O
closer=O
structure=O
vocab=O
punchs=O
overall=Orion.

uppin.............................................

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11...

This was feedback posted for Hot Sauce
 

just checkin, 'tis all..................................

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This was feedback posted for Hot Sauce
 

good battle
checking polls...............................

Voted For: Orion.

this wasnt difficult.

Firstly Hot Sauce your structure was out of sync to wat im used to so i had to decipher the verse before i could read it. Ya flow was alrite, would have been better if it was easier to read and the lines wasnt as stretched. ur opener was ok, a good punch but stretched and not hitting as hard. Closer was ok again but not much more i wasnt feeling it at all. Overall you had a lot of quite good punches, with some mtaphors packed in too.

Orion: your verse was a lot more wat i am used to so easier to read and very entertaining. Opener was ok, nice punch hit quite hard. Closer was real good., Was really feeling this. nice metaphor, hit hard. Overall ya punches were good, no real personals but neither did he. Good metaphor uses which made a clever verse.