Youngun vs L.O. Quent
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-28-04 at 05:54 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

L.O. Quent has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-25-04 05:57 AM.

Youngun has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-25-04 06:12 AM.

dumb herb nobody reads your words, like verses from noobies
and if anyone actually peeps youngun's - i'dll be the movie
truly you do blow little ho, i'm sorry that i have to b a dick
but i'd never seen anything worse than your text - until yer soundclick
i pound kids, yer no expection, chin checkin duke for fun
n you're right only the best survive - which is why you've never won
better run for yer sonned, dun you're not exactly clever
i own you so what's that make me ...if you're the illest ever
never post again fag, smashed, this noobie's dead
cus from youngun all you'll see is ass - like the booty thread


smoked...

you take your time to write so ill post my verse first,
theres no need to post a verse, you'll be dead in a hurst,
feeling hatred is a natural thing, dont get your feelings mixed,
try to straighten em out cos we all know, you'll be feeling my dick,
licking a bit, i'm feeling so sick, so imma chop you up each bit by bit,
quick, L.O, what that fuck does that stand for laxative override,
your over mine, ill delete you jus like i would delete my computer megadrive,
you accapted on 5.57 itsw now 9.05, how long does it take,
one line and a kit kat break, fat fucker you need to lose weight,
he finnally finishes his verse, jumps off his p.c and the whole world starts to shake.

Voted For: L.O. Quent

flow LO
Structure Lo
personal LO
harder punches LO
rhyming tie
But most of all closure LO got my vote so peace out!!!! and merry x-mas!

aight good verse uppin this shit...................

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Voted For: Youngun

VOte: Youngun

L.O.quent- meh..........solid average drop.......some played ass concepts in ur drop tho like: the booty thread stuff..........ur opener was pretty dope...work on more creative punches like ur opener and ull b doper

Youngun: went with your drop cos of the multi-flow u got goingwhich was tight and also the humourous punches in ur drop........favourite bars:
try to straighten em out cos we all know, you'll be feeling my dick,
licking a bit, i'm feeling so sick, so imma chop you up each bit by bit,
quick, L.O, what that fuck does that stand for laxative override,
your over mine, ill delete you jus like i would delete my computer megadrive,

nice multis and jokes when u ripped his name so u came wid a personal aswell...

RTF - links in sig

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Voted For: Youngun

No hate whatsoever cuz here comes the break-down...

L.O. Quent

dumb herb nobody reads your words, like verses from noobies
and if anyone actually peeps youngun's - i'dll be the movie
^good opener

truly you do blow little ho, i'm sorry that i have to b a dick
but i'd never seen anything worse than your text - until yer soundclick
^hehe,okay okay

i pound kids, yer no expection, chin checkin duke for fun
n you're right only the best survive - which is why you've never won
^nice one

better run for yer sonned, dun you're not exactly clever
i own you so what's that make me ...if you're the illest ever
^yup, it'll do...

never post again fag, smashed, this noobie's dead
cus from youngun all you'll see is ass - like the booty thread
^decent closer

Vocab,structure n flow were good. Had some punches n personals in there, could be more hardhitting and original but overall okay drop...


Youngun

you take your time to write so ill post my verse first,
theres no need to post a verse, you'll be dead in a hurst,
^could've worded second line better but decent

feeling hatred is a natural thing, dont get your feelings mixed,
try to straighten em out cos we all know, you'll be feeling my dick,
^nope, not feeling it

licking a bit, i'm feeling so sick, so imma chop you up each bit by bit,
quick, L.O, what that fuck does that stand for laxative override,
your over mine, ill delete you jus like i would delete my computer megadrive,
^good good...

you accapted on 5.57 itsw now 9.05, how long does it take,
one line and a kit kat break, fat fucker you need to lose weight,
he finnally finishes his verse, jumps off his p.c and the whole world starts to shake.
^haha,funny closer

You had some more original punches n personals in there and your structure,flow and vocav were tight...keep on doing your thing...