OGfromPawtucket vs jacktheripper24
 

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jacktheripper24 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 11:37 AM.

OGfromPawtucket has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 11:37 AM.

Seabass, your a goofy lookin motherfucker
Although you attract god damn white trash truckers
You flashed your nut at me yesterday
I said you like truckers your a motherfuckin gay
faggot to guys you like to shag it
blast your load on em it gets rid of their back itch

i'll interupt your little world of perfectness, to bring you this shit, that i can murder you with, to curse and diss with verses so mercy-less, these words can just fuck up you mind worse than this.......i'll kill you fo laughs, i'll dump your body in the motherfuckin wilderness, i'm a wildabeast, and i'll conceal the peice even after i'm busted by these fucking police, you think just because i got caught by these cops once, that i'm not gonna carry shotguns to blow your wig back like a hamburger without any top bun, so many damn murders i can't even count one, 2 black guns, i dont know maybe there magnums, i dont know what the fuck they're called i just grab 'em

what are you talkin about kid.....i'm so much mo' betta

bump

Voted For: jacktheripper24

aight, um. wow.
well this battle...props for effort by the way...was fairly whack, elevation is need from OG on a whole nother level. But it's definately good to see you trying. Jack the ripper had better vocab, content, flow, and short use of multi's.
i give it to jack the ripper

Voted For: jacktheripper24

i think it was a bit more concentrated fo J24, but could still use some work, OG didnt concentrate much on gay stuff, only da Truckers and shit. I think if ya could do it longer ya could have won

Voted For: jacktheripper24

I think Jack won this one.... He had alot better flow.... And Og you werent bad but i think Jack took this one...

Return tha FAVA!! please... on the one Vs. Fr3mSoul I only need one more vote to ... so please check it out... Thanx!!

Voted For: jacktheripper24

Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to
jack... his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good
His flow was heavenly and
his wordplay just killed him
Very good battle

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Not gonna vote because OG's a little bitch, I just wanted to see who agrees with me (who voted for jack)...

Voted For: jacktheripper24

i voted for ya jack cuz were u were better, but im not saying either one of you were great. jack u had better punches, flow, your structure wuz a bit hard to read but no big probs. OG u just, god. haha i thank u cuz i needed a laugh. gay jokes and punches that missed. peace

Voted For: jacktheripper24

og ender aint rhyme flow and stucture was ok opener was weak punches and disses aint hit vocab needs work a 1.5/10
jack it dont take much to win here good vocab opener ok stucture streched no disses or punches good for you either a 2/10
basically i have nothing to judge but vocab for jack and stucture for og and jack had a slightly better verse in all other aspects basically weak battle and jack won