M.A.F.i.A vs shi-1
 

Battle Rules:

6 barz
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-31-05 at 08:56 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

M.A.F.i.A has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-05 02:11 PM.

From the get go, i'ma let my quotables fool ya
cuz u aint got common sense, so ya odor's peculiar
SHI-1, that aint a name u should try ta' defame
u must be sittin in a opened Xbox, cuz yo behind in the game
yeah i'm slept on, but thaz what annoyin people do
plus i still got the capacity to let the soil sleep on u
i dunno why u rap, who u think ya kiddin mate?
the only way u'd have hard bars is if u was Shyne's prisonmate
i'm shootin fo the top, n if i'm denied ma' spot,
then shit'll git hairier than ya shadow at 5 o'clock

Shi-1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 07:23 AM.

As I slaughter you, nobody will bother to squeeze a tear drop
Hell, the MAFIA’s been dead since Little Ceez career flopped
The sheer shock when this queer drops, no punches is all you saw
M.A.F.I.A., you’re so pussy…. for short I’ll just call you Ma’
Somehow I just don’t believe it. You suburban kids are questionable.
I’ve watched GodFather movies too, but its clear who was more impressionable
But Shi knows you’re a Good Fella!! …….Yes your records researched by her.
And the closest you’ve been 2 a mafia, is with the Sopranos…..in ur church choir
Your works tired,… your 1-word rhyme scheme is rather sulky
Hell, I use to write like that too! Now I understand the concept of multi’s
And you obviously haven’t grasped that. So don’t ever think that ur testin me.
Since you’re from Beantown. When I leave you Halfbaked, just call it ur destiny.
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6 bars….
And I’m done.

^^^uppin for votes

return tha favor, i know u want to :gfy:

^^^uppin for votes

return tha favor, i know u want to

Voted For: Shi-1

aight baby nice werk
multis shi
hits shi
opener shi
closer tie
yo you need ta werk on makin your rhymes less spaced out
and everything will go smoother

yo mafia man your multies are shit dawg werk on ya structure too and your lines are too short anyway nice battle dawg but i gotta give it to tha miss this time playa

Thankz For Votin....uppin For More Votes!
.lets Go Yall.....where The Votes At?

Voted For: Shi-1

*claps*good job to da both of you dats was hella hard
but....well heres da breakdown
stcture=MA' lol
punches=shi,both had hella but i felt shi hit hardess
personals=shi,i felt they were like continually
creativity was used constsntly for both
but i feel shi should take it so fasho,
v/shi-1
rtf

Voted For: Shi-1

too easy...
shi's wordplay was definitele better than mafia's and i liked that lil cease line...lol....great way to open it up...2nd bar was kinda iffy...the other 4 bars were decent....had some humor to it... but the opener waas definitely the strongest

mafia...ya need to work on ya ideas more...all ya lines were kinda simple...that shyne line was terrible....the slept on line made no sense.... the x-box line?... d it!...you got potential but ya still need work... expand on ya ideas more and try to flip 'em a lil different... try using multi's ...it's not needed but it makes for a more complex verse and might even flow better when used properly.

giving it up to shi-1 this time for an obviously better verse

This was feedback posted for Shi-1
 

wow this was one-sided mos definately.. lol Shi-1 girl you had a few stretched bars but you had some consistent personals and nice punches, creative material.. but yo kno we in the same crew so i can't even vote for ya ma...................... but keep reppin, you doin good shit.. Stay Up girl..! :thumbup:
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Voted For: Shi-1

Shi-1's Verse
Somehow I just don’t believe it. You suburban kids are questionable.
I’ve watched GodFather movies too, but its clear who was more impressionable
And you obviously haven’t grasped that. So don’t ever think that ur testin me.
Since you’re from Beantown. When I leave you Halfbaked, just call it ur destiny.

Vs.

Nothing

Overall this was a 1-sided battle…

Mafia ur drop, I wasn’t much feelin it here, punches were weak
Had a good flow + structure, and that’s it, work on them punches
More…but overall elevate on ur whole thing though

Shi-1 you had an aight drop, punches were much harder than Mafia’s
Ur structure was too-stretched here, and the flow to it was getting choppy
@ the end though, but u did good

no hate

This was feedback posted for M.A.F.i.A
 

Well imma vote for um....... shi-1 cuz um ur stuff was way better..... mafia the line about opened xbox was the dumbest thing I think i have ever heard!!!!

yo is this battle over yet?
How and when do battles end here?
thanks for voting thus far tho people