I Walk Alone
 

this tha 1st joint i did back in 2003...

all produced by me... nothin special but sum feed would be appreciated


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=398806

where u from in UK???

beat is shit... flow is sloppy, has no structure, delivery is weak.. lyrics are weak, wtf @ this hook??? eewwww... this sounds like spoken word, but done poorly, sorry, just not feeling this at all

this was very odd
the effects were odd

the beat was odd

ur flow sounds like a record being played backwards

I will give you kudos for being different, but it's unidentifiable.


not feelin it

come with something basic, then build...


this was wack


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ah fuck ya'll lol this da first rap shit i ever did first take...

i got sum up comin, be sure to check it XD

peace

thx 4 da feed