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Lay. 06-15-08 09:42 PM

Flash ( 3 ) vs Satan ( 3 )
 
Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line limits:
10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Goodluck.

Satan. 06-16-08 07:44 PM

I am checking in

Satan. 06-19-08 09:42 AM

You ain't a rapper, you can't even check in right, u don't influence me
Your verses only turn heads so lay can spit on your computer screen
So back off from it, cuz you ain't ggot nothin to offer
Cuz you have some rap sence, while everyone's carrying dollars
I'm winnin this with flying colors dude, ur so easy to beat
And if there were any buts about it, it's your ass under a tree
So lay off, before he beats your ass ya heard? u need to take a seat
Since you only body dudes asses on gay pride week
So yea i might be takin it simple, i hope this letter stings you through
But honestly cuz, you no showed prolly, and i got better things to do

Lay. 06-19-08 10:01 AM

Flash -2 votes for not checking in by Wed.

fuck yuu 06-19-08 10:03 AM

my bad... i had court and i dont got the net so i cant really get on whenever i want unless its from my phone but then RV is so big with its banner and shit i cant even scroll down to VTL

Lay. 06-19-08 10:07 AM

Lol next time let me know ahead of time, so the check thing won't be an issue. You gonna be able to have your verse by friday?

fuck yuu 06-19-08 10:23 AM

EH FUCK FRIDAY I'LL KEY SOMETHING NOW.

Tried to be creative but there's No Limit to his wackness
Couldn't ever beat me, even if I helped this kid practice
your pad and pen nigga go ahead jus set it on da ground
even though i'm on my computer I'm still gonna shut it down
my lyrics have you running around in circles like a dog chasing it's tail
home boi in yo mind keep thinking i'm a test to ace and you gonna fail
your girl told me riding your dick was like a bike with training wheels
erectile dysfunction must really make it "hard" for satan to feel
I'm attackin-clicks, slap-ya-bitch, and smash-ya-quick
bash-n-hit, wouldn't make the cut if ya packed-a-switch

Kirk 06-22-08 04:32 AM

V/Flash.

I honestly didn't like either of the verses too much. I give my vote to Flash because of creativity. I'm not hating or anything, Satan. I thought alot of your punches were corny and alot of your concepts were played.

Lay. 06-22-08 10:29 AM

So back off from it, cuz you ain't ggot nothin to offer
Cuz you have some rap sence, while everyone's carrying dollars

vs

your girl told me riding your dick was like a bike with training wheels
erectile dysfunction must really make it "hard" for satan to feel

Eh..I'd have to say Flash just by a little, I know you thought Flash was gonna no show satan haha but it was still to early in the week to tell. Wait a lil longer next time, cuz this one bit you in the ass barely.

v/Flash

Format 06-22-08 10:42 AM

You ain't a rapper, you can't even check in right, u don't influence me
Your verses only turn heads so lay can spit on your computer screen
eh. concept was odd
So back off from it, cuz you ain't ggot nothin to offer
Cuz you have some rap sence, while everyone's carrying dollars
didnt really hit
I'm winnin this with flying colors dude, ur so easy to beat
And if there were any buts about it, it's your ass under a tree
concept was there but the wording made the punch come outta nowhere
So lay off, before he beats your ass ya heard? u need to take a seat
Since you only body dudes asses on gay pride week
lol funny
So yea i might be takin it simple, i hope this letter stings you through
But honestly cuz, you no showed prolly, and i got better things to do
filler

Tried to be creative but there's No Limit to his wackness
Couldn't ever beat me, even if I helped this kid practice
no, nothin to it
your pad and pen nigga go ahead jus set it on da ground
even though i'm on my computer I'm still gonna shut it down
same as the last line
my lyrics have you running around in circles like a dog chasing it's tail
home boi in yo mind keep thinking i'm a test to ace and you gonna fail
nah
your girl told me riding your dick was like a bike with training wheels
erectile dysfunction must really make it "hard" for satan to feel
pretty funny
I'm attackin-clicks, slap-ya-bitch, and smash-ya-quick
bash-n-hit, wouldn't make the cut if ya packed-a-switch
no

flash had a lot of filler lines with nothin to them. satan had some concepts that were worded badly n the gay pride week line that i liked. i thought satan was better really

v/ satan

Lay. 06-22-08 09:00 PM

Satan wins 1 vote to none.

Satan ( 5 ) and Flash ( 5 )


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