"Tell Me" -M.A.S. ft. Bobby Valentino
word, Decree and Tizzle doin' that shit wit bobby Valentino. Yea, I posted this, but I ain't spit on this, I jus looped verses longer and put hook and shit on. :cool:
but word.. Intro: Bobby Valentino First verse: Decree Second verse: Bobby Valentino Third verse: Tizzle Bridge: Bobby Valentino Hook: Bobby Valentino Beat: "Tell Me" by Bobby Valentino Song Link (CLICK HERE!!!) Link 1 Link 2 |
yeah, Bobby Valentino the newest member of O.K. :cool:
dope shit yall, of course..... P.S. anybody know where Decree is? :huh: he's supposed to be on a collab wit me and im done with my part |
^^foo thats not feed!!!
and nah i aint know where decree is....prolly died again |
decree i think you could up your volume a bit, its a bit hard to hear you ya know, this beat is very loud though i dont know why, anyway decree you did pretty good lyrics wasn't bad flow wasn't bad emotion could be upped some what more lyrics i thought maybe didn't quite fit this track but they would be good if the track was tittled somin else maybe, tizzle somins fuckin up your sound, are you addin some filter you shouldnt be, flow aint to bad, emotion is pretty good, its your quality that needs work thats all really.
anyway cool lil remix, could yall rtf on my track "Split Optics, 1 |
^yea i gotchu para...
props on da feed |
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aight, u want feed.... decree, pretty nice lyrics but i thought your flow was a little bit off from where it normally is, tizz i agree completely with Para it sounds like u had some kinda filter on your voice in this one or somethin for some reason but i really liked how your verse kinda built up and stayed on topic the whole time.. werrd.... :shoot: OK! |
why don't you leave feed like that for M.A.S anthem track? :shoot: lol
but word @ join' fan club. :cool: and Tizz and D, y'all already kno what I think of shit. good shit. keep it up. M.A.S.!!! OK!!! |
weerd....
my mic is just gay :) |
word....... uppin' this for y'all...
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yea, im just overwhelmed by the feedback......
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:shocked:
so much feed..... |
cmon yall
shit will be returned.....leave links if you need to |
pshhhh @ your sig.. prolly never even started workin' on mine. :shoot:
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decree i can barely hear u in the beggining but then in the middle of ur verse u get louder so its cool
ur lyrics were pretty good flow was actually pretty godd off in like 2 places nothing big though props i think ur emotion could have been better but overall good tizzle yea i agree ur mic is gay lol ur voice fits this track well i like it ur flow isnt as good as it was on the mas anthem but its alot better than it was so no big deal again ur emotion could use work but ull get that down ur getting better and better ull be one of the top heads on rv in a few months at the rate ur elevating ur very determined jus work on ur emotion and save up and buy a ne mic lol 7/10 |
^^appreciate feed willa
and yea, id love to buy a new mic =/ |
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