kelsick39 vs BlackDeathDB
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-31-05 at 10:56 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

dont bitch out

BlackDeathDB has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-31-05 10:32 PM.

kelsick39 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-31-05 10:35 PM.

This boys a joke, bad lyrics you know its him
his blimp is broke, like a bad show on Nickelodeon
Matter fact, hes missing his best friend
a bad act, atleast we know where keenan and kel went
Hes from the illstate and his name is kelsick
at this rate, thousands of people are dead cause he sucked their dick
I gotta kill him quick, just one more dead prick
We know i'm putting him to rest, with just one click
Cuz he messed wit the BlackDeath, and his ass got sick

yo, Death aint sure, he's just curious george
but its a furious gorge, about to leave serious warts
i know in ur dreams at night, the kel haunts you
i guess BlackDeath is fitting, since nobody wants u
Wen i punch, all u see is bleedin, a red head
Cuz i'll leave the DB to rest on his Death Bed
a Peasant a farmer, wat ur spittin is pitiful,wageless
its like a life crisis the way ur stuck in the middle ages

Uppin ppl

cmon ppl

this newb battle is masterful!!!!!!!

Voted For: kelsick39

yo kel definatly won this shit the other cat was garbage any kel came semi decent on the punches and multi's and just took this one away he a couple of mice lines but the other guy didnt really have to much going for him

Khaos_daRenegade, yo weak ass. Making general comments. When you actually get some skill then you can vote, i'll battle you right now

This was feedback posted for BlackDeathDB
 

wack battle........... wat have our newbs come too!

Voted For: kelsick39

at first i was gonna vote for bd after reading kel's but then i read bd's and it was terrible...this battle wasnt good at all, but at least it was short, lol.....kel wins because of punches and thats all....both verses had basically nothing worth bragging about, but kel wins because bd kept talking about how heez gonna make you sick...well his verse definitloy did....
v/kelsick39

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/\nightmare/\ , i'm not sure if you know this but his name is kelsick....

Voted For: BlackDeathDB

BLACk-Punches was ok, needs to elevate though......Wordplay i like the "nickelodeon" line very creative fam.......Flowed good...All flow and punches...You need some multi'z and add some personals to your verse....




Kel-Ok punches came weak, not hard hitting. Effective but weak. Flowed good. Disses his name thats a personal but you need to go deeper than that...Add multi'z to your verse....Wordplays too




overall=I think Black got this, cause he threw some effective punches, While kel threw some weak ones, not very hard hitting. Both head'z (kel and black) needs to work on punches and wordplays and using personals. I vote for black cause he threw some effective punches, kel threw weak punches, need elevation though BOTH HEADS DO.