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"Crhyme Dynasty"
(...heres some incomplete quickness, hollar...)
"CRHYME DYNASTY" (SUPERVILLAIN feat. CHALK CLOROX) *SUPERVILLAIN* "fellow birds of a feather.....aim high, take flight and grace skies this family reigns like grey skies and theres no place to stay dry we're cutting edge and stay like serrated blades on steak knives idles put in their place...and have 'em stay like facin' brake lights imagine if u could write lines precise and passionate just like atticus but u cant, sublime design, crhyme shines like lights on amythist alliance of demi-gods, crhyme history literally packed with glory we triumph at any cost....c.s. boss motto is "victory's mandatory" our equals: unknown, my folks: elitist geniuses in leagues of our own guilty on all counts, bang the gavel!!!...s.v. is king of the throne administer pain to all quitters, they're victims, let our winners remain witness the faith of the sinnister, mister saint sinner the great lesson: do as we do, improve and choose to move as my legends and u too could be cruisin' da fast lane, zoomin' in pursuit of perfection" *CHALK CLOROX* "yo........no lies, im a known guy in the crhyme dynasty, constantly fuckin' up petty cats that drop dimes righteously, thats why we take pride and ride violently on thy society, remindin' me that you and your kind are the type to die silently, we're the truest, smoothest, cruelest crew killin' crooks, we'll leave you droolin' fools toothless, clueless, 'chillin cooked', .....once the rudist and most ruthless villains look, we break in and take wins from you foolish dealin' rooks, we're always pounding on crewless newbs used to feelin' shook, our styles too addictive, get it? we'll leave you feelin' hooked, i know you feel this trill shit 'cuz theres no hidden subliminals, we're the illest, non fiction spittin'-est, realest of criminals, at minimal, we'll beat your grill in until the deal then is critical, if you ever wake up to face us you'll be feelin' quite miserable, this is crhyme legacy, we're legends, we'll always carry on, .....very strong and united, even if the sites dead, buried, gone" ...the supervillain of crhyme, bossin' up... |
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Wow this was some extremely dope shit right here. Real Classik. The feel of it i would describe it as...hood deep. Multies on point, concept on point, vocab above average, feel real nice,. man I give this a 9.5/10
lesson: do as we do, improve and choose to move as my legends and u too could be cruisin' da fast lane, zoomin' in pursuit of perfection" Favorite line^^^ Plz Rtf on My open mic's in my sig(Namely "Just Ridin Through" or "Still I Try" and "Back To Business") Preciate the drop and feed will be even more apreciated.Stay up ~1~ |
word up kidd, that shit was pretty dope, i liked how u used the multies to end it up to another line. it blends in from one rhyme to another so 2 rhymes that dont Rhyme sound like they do. pretty tight. and u had good vocab and stuff. really liked the line of glory and our victory mandatory... pretty intelligent shit. keep it up. and i think u should finish this shit.
hit me up if u do so i can leave more feed kidd. |
Boost the mother fucking crhyme rate!!!
solid drop CS! |
word good shit man. Like the flow a lot. Good structure too. pretty good drop. keep it up man. RTF if you can....
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"fellow birds of a feather.....aim high, take flight and grace skies
this family reigns like grey skies and theres no place to stay dry loved this bar alliance of demi-gods, crhyme history literally packed with glory we triumph at any cost....c.s. boss motto is "victory's mandatory" dope and stuff lesson: do as we do, improve and choose to move as my legends and u too could be cruisin' da fast lane, zoomin' in pursuit of perfection" nice closer.. CS STAND UP! or something |
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Ah man, I do wish... That atiquiz kid some dophe ;) Nice piece man, haven't seen a strong crew rep in a long while. This just gave me such an oldschool: Wu/Reakwon type of feel. It was just real cool. Very nice flow and structure throughout, strong wordplay and creative incorperation of little Crhyme details and shit. Overall this was just a nicely written piece, I enjoyed the read alot man. C.S. to the fullest man. |
^^^UPPIN' FOR MORE IN DEPTH FEEDBACK FOR ME AND CHALK!!! respond......fuckers. lol.
s.v. |
nice werk yo....this shit was real ill......and chalk got down......havent read his shit in a while....dopeness.....
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^^^thanks for the feedback my crhyme legend, i really appreciate it fam.......UPPIN'!!!
s.v. |
nice piece I liked it alot.
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Yeah.....this was an enjoyable read. The multis were fluid from both. Was definitely worth peeping. Stay up fellas :thumbup:™
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