Call_it_murder01 vs Cdusit
 

Battle Rules:

4-6 barz or 8-12 lines (how ever u wanna call it)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no dick riding
no hate votes
no unexplained votes
no bullshit votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-17-05 at 05:32 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Call_it_Murder01 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-05 05:38 PM.

Cdusit has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-05 06:00 PM.

its like.......

beating me is as likley as throwing ice cubes at the sun
Fuck...you couldnt even match my opener..call it done?
but just so i dont get D'Q ill simply match line limits
battling you im seeing more pussy that a lesbians mind submits
ya names intials backwards is what ya far from picking up
I leave you falling solo like half the twin towers.. hit and struck
kid your a waste of my time like broken clocks in the garbage
your verse is a pure mess like youve simply split a ink cartridge
I spose it times for the curtain to close on another loss to you
maybe think about getting ya name changed Mr Call_it_murder02*

*last line name play= his names numbers currently equal his record 01.. after this it will be 02..

To start out, ur dirty das why yo' knees sore.
I know I could punch u out asoon as I hit the keyboard//1
Cetch a crotch rocket wit no charge ur none profit.
Fuck poundin u my punchlines crack ya spine from my pocket//2
Your high strung, leave u stringy from five guns.
say goodbye to ur wife as she says hi to my tougue//3 (ouch)
She needs lovin', ull never be seen in the public.
If uve seen my whole town happy from oral t hen u no C does it//4*

*His name Cdusit

^^^^^uppin for votes if uve read this

nice drop votes ? .

Voted For: Cdusit

Cdusit-some wordplay but i thought it could of improve and done alot better but overall it was an average verse, nothin bad, nothin too special but good i guess

call_it_murder-you also had an ok verse it wasnt nothin special none of it really catched my eye

kinda hard to vote on but i think this would go to Cdusit just for more wordplay

vote//cdusit

Voted For: Cdusit

Well, this was obvious you won. Your verse is pretty good. Could definately elevate. Work on punches and set ups/fresh concepts. Good structure. Keep at it.

Voted For: Cdusit

Cdusit:
beating me is as likley as throwing ice cubes at the sun
Fuck...you couldnt even match my opener..call it done?
Good Start - 5/10
but just so i dont get D'Q ill simply match line limits
battling you im seeing more pussy that a lesbians mind submits
NO - 2/10
ya names intials backwards is what ya far from picking up
I leave you falling solo like half the twin towers.. hit and struck
Didnt Like it - 3/10
kid your a waste of my time like broken clocks in the garbage
your verse is a pure mess like youve simply split a ink cartridge
Ok Punch - 4/10
I spose it times for the curtain to close on another loss to you
maybe think about getting ya name changed Mr Call_it_murder02*
iight Personal - 4.5/10
18.5/50

You had some good punches and personals, and the flow was pretty good.


Call_it_Murder01:
To start out, ur dirty das why yo' knees sore.
I know I could punch u out asoon as I hit the keyboard//1
MEH - 2/10
Cetch a crotch rocket wit no charge ur none profit.
Fuck poundin u my punchlines crack ya spine from my pocket//2
NO - 1/10
Your high strung, leave u stringy from five guns.
say goodbye to ur wife as she says hi to my tougue//3 (ouch)
Not Hittin' - 2/10
She needs lovin', ull never be seen in the public.
If uve seen my whole town happy from oral t hen u no C does it//4*
NO - 1/10
6/40

You need to work on your punchlines, all you can do is flow, you need to be more creative.

Vote - CD

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Voted For: Cdusit

She needs lovin', ull never be seen in the public.
If uve seen my whole town happy from oral t hen u no C does it//4*
VS.
I spose it times for the curtain to close on another loss to you
maybe think about getting ya name changed Mr Call_it_murder02*

there's a clear winner here, nothin spectacular from either but these are the best punches i saw and call it murder came pretty wack on this one.

V/Cdusit

can i get one more vote on this to close it please.

Voted For: Cdusit

ma vote gone have to go to Cdusit
for da simple fact dat he came up more stuff against his opponent
and had some good word play along with his verses dat were betta den his opponent
his openning was good and he seemed to have came more harder den his opponent
punches were short and quick and never thee last beta

bet line was his opening to me
*beating me is as likley as throwing ice cubes at the sun*

Call_it_Murder01
had some decent punches but some of his verse didnt make sense
verse were kinda of choppy and boring at one point and didnt really stick out to me
also it seemed like to me he was trying to copying but it doesnt really matta