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Mc *MaZe* 09-12-04 09:04 AM

realistik vs Mc *MaZe*
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-15-04 at 09:04 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 09-12-04 09:05 AM

Mc *MaZe* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 09:05 AM.

Mc *MaZe* 09-12-04 09:28 AM

look, dont start off like you sum lyrical don
coz ill leave you lyricaly tipsy like j-kwon
ill make you feel the power of my flow its kind ov hektic
or ill let my lil cuzzin finnish you off and he's dislecsik
coz wen it comes to the door of mc's i am the key
my lyrics will beat you and send you to the NSPCC
so look,dis is ma' 7th line and it dont come cheep
the price to pay is REALISTIK 6 foot deep


(NSPCC = NATIONAL SOCIOTY for the PROVENTION of CRULTY to CHILDREN)

Hate chew 09-13-04 12:21 AM

possesing a lesson in discresion to get a confession..
facts lact they back track the crack sack...
im searching an lurching to make or break..
mc maze relized battling me is a mistake...
this aint a movie..you fukt up.. no second take...
you must be made a silicone.because your that fake...
your rhymes are disleksic and handicapped..
like his clothes..rhymes are all hand me back......
you relise now instead a battling me you ..shoulda just left ha?
this bitch couldnt pimp a hoe ..if his name was hue hefna..
you being creative............
is as likley as a bush being an african native.....

sorry i went over the limit ..but i couldnt stop typing.......

System 09-13-04 12:23 AM

REALISTIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 12:23 AM.

Hate chew 09-13-04 12:24 AM

**edit**...ahhh my bad im high...

possesing a lesson in discresion to get a confession..
facts lact they back track the crack sack...
im searching an lurching to make or break..
mc maze relized battling me is a mistake...
this aint a movie..you fukt up.. no second take...
you must be made a silicone.because your that fake...
your rhymes are disleksic and handicapped..
like his clothes..rhymes are all hand me back......
you relise now instead a battling me you ..shoulda just left ha?
this bitch couldnt pimp a hoe ..if his name was hue hefna..
you being creative............
is as likley as a bush being an african native.....

sorry i went over the limit ..but i couldnt stop typing...

Spektikul 09-13-04 03:34 AM

Voted For: Mc *MaZe*

I actually Thought that Realistik had the better verse because of his wordplay, hard punched and great vocab

This is what Maze should be elevating on:
-Longer lines/bars
-Harder punches/personals
-Try using better multies/metas
You had good structure, and alright wordplay, just elevate where I told you and youll be on your way.

But Realistik obviously knew the line specifications, as he apologized for going over...But I just cb't give a win to ppl that dont follow the rules. Sorry dawg, no hate, just bein honest, ya know?
I didnt know what to say about this battle as it was over to begin with due to not following the rules...but I hope I explained myself as best as I could...better luck next time Real, you had him on this...peace...

Spektikul 09-13-04 03:35 AM

Please leave feed/vote on my battle with your honest opinions/comments as I have just dont for the both of you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...565909&posted=1
Thank you so much, peace...

Hate chew 09-13-04 03:44 AM

what the fuck??????????/ i clearly ript this toy ..... but yeah if thats your vote and your reason for voting is because i dropt a extra punch ..then i suck..........pz

Mc *MaZe* 09-13-04 04:02 AM

uppiiinnn my votes !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mc *MaZe* 09-13-04 04:35 AM

Aiyo
 
real sorry dawg but thats the way it goes homie hahaaha tough aint it no h8 dwag :thumbup: rememba wot i sed to you in da pm about my battles

its up to you homie lol

Dirty Nigga 09-13-04 07:10 AM

Voted For: Mc *MaZe*

Aight Overall Maze Got This, Better Wordplay n Some Okay Metas...

Both Lacked Creativeness An Hard Hittin Punches...
Maze's Personals Hit Harder n Better Useage Of His Lines..

Realistik, Ya Finisher Was Nice Tho, The Bush ine, LOL, I Like'd That

Both Elevate n Up Ya Vocab n Punches, Try Addin Humour An Maybe Multies Too

No Hate, Keep Em Comin

Nice Drop From You Both

Return The Favor

P E A C E

Hate chew 09-13-04 02:18 PM

wtf shotta???? thats wrong man ........you musta got a pm from mc maze like the one he pm'ed me saying" hey man vote for me in this battle and ill return the favour on 1 a yours".......... theres is no way he beat me in this battle..........

pz

Yvonne 09-13-04 03:57 PM

Voted For: REALISTIK

lol yo realiztik gets this....he had a gd vocab...and he focused more on the battle(besides the fact that he high..lol)...he had some funny and hard punches...his wordplay was tight too(7/10)...maze ur verse was tight too..but u was talking about ur cousin..i mean its u whos battling not ur cousin..nah mean?..and your closer kinna slacked (5.6/10)....anyways my vote gose to realiztik...gd job boyz ;)

holla

Hate chew 09-14-04 03:26 AM

iight thnx for the vote....................upping for more votes.....

oh yeah .this bitch maze accidently pm'ed me some shit about voting for him in his battle and he"l return the favour............

if you wanna see it say and ill post the whole pm here......



anyway upping for more real votes!!!

pz


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