This was feedback posted for Zone Out
 

checkin poll .

Voted For: 286

feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeedddddddddddddddd dpolll


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you might wana have that vote took off !!! i jus woke up n pressed the wrong butten... !

Voted For: 286

Wouldn't be fair for me to vote but DAMN seriously that's why 286 is my guy....


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My badskies have my last vote erased i meant to post feed back.

Oh and Zone out send me that beat it was dope as fuck.

Voted For: Zone Out

hahahahhaha....BWHAHAHAHAHHAA.....those pic's...

Flow: Zone
Punches: Zone


i had it when people beat jack...n they give the beat a shitty remake.....

Zone was better either way....

This was feedback posted for Zone Out
 

Zone most likley took this after a quick listen .

Voted For: Zone Out

Overall I think that Jay would have won this battle, but he went way over the time limit. He also had alot of week shit, if you would have just cut some of that lame shit out and just brought the fire and kept it 1:30 you would have owned.

Zone, he is true what he says, you need to say your shit more clean, I could understand some of it, but other times I couldnt, you didnt really have that nice of lines. He also called you when he said "im zone out, im just gonna talk about shootin ya" or whatever cuz the only thing I really understood was that.

This was feedback posted for 286
 

Aight let me break this shit down...

I like the breathe beat...u callin out mas?...better not mention my name...

flow is ok...rlly..nothing else on this gorrila line was the only thing i was feelin...

ROFL ZONE at using I did you wrong hahahahhahah...song for bitches...well i see it..punches hot...crew vote so jus feedback...LOL...zone killed this

This was feedback posted for Zone Out
 

Zone Out
Aight.....beat's not bad. Kinda dipsetty. Your delivery just didn't do it for me on this one too much. Punches were there, but the whole feel of it felt pretty amateurish to me. I think it was the delivery man....it just came off too laid back to me.

Jay286
Aight man, you shouldn't really use beats like this that have a gimmick concept in their original versions cause you just get compared to the original too much. The hook/intro was too low and I just wasn't feeling it at all man. The verse was nice. You had some good punches in there just like Zone Out did. Your delivery was better though. The feel of your verse made this whole song. The intro shit really killed the anticipation of the track, but you kinda made up for it in the end.


I'd vote, but I don't wanna seem biased toward Jay since he's in OYD and shit, but that's who I would have voted for.


Good shit from both though.....hope there's no real beef here :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for 286
 

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This was feedback posted for 286
 

I like your voice...
But zone got you on flow and shit..

Voted For: 286

quotables 286
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wouldn't sit up at the computer chair even at crunch time
wit a nose that big and he still runs outta breathe
i can't understand this dick wit the come he spittin through
why don't u enunciate your werds so i can hear the shit
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had a few real played lines though... funny mocking at the end, dude be soundin funny. pretty decent
vs.
couldn't flow if u came out faucet... haha, lame
and all them gun lines was lame, imma send u to heaven, make u fall on a bullet. lame

quoatables...
he gassed up and imma bring a match today
imma give 'em a black eye so he dont have to wear make'up
all jokes aside so thats why dude sittin on the bench
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couple good lines from both but i think 286 came wit some more creative and personal shit and an extra punch than zone. pretty close battle here but for sure
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vote- 286