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Everybody diss Fuck you all
These kids are like "wetdreams" Cuz they're embarassing
Got more cumstains then good lyrics its fuckin hilarious Couldnt drop a hit...If the punches was handed to them Or find one real bitch that was willing to do them Lets knuckle it out.. I'll be on you like a shadow bitch You stepping to this is like Oprah Winfrey gettin Thin Anybody wanting to step up please do... Look out haters...I'll be lookin for you too I'm comin with heat, The contents are explosive dudes You actually winning a battle against me, Is slim-2-few Cant be afraid to die if you have nothing to lose So bring what you got..In text and I'll execute you fools (verse) I run this bitch, so keep fuckin around I'll Knock ya in ya face, Ima knock you out To all these pussies, Ima make you bow Cuz I have returned, Ima take you down I refer to these bitches as boxing shoes...Always on the canvas Backing dudes into walls like bricks...Nigga im the baddest Institutionalized I realized, You a bunch of blockheads You should have never opened this door...never knocked it Bring it bitches |
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lol...............u suck............
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I run this bitch, so keep fuckin around
I'll Knock ya in ya face, Ima knock you out To all these pussies, Ima make you bow Cuz I have returned, Ima take you down ^^^^ Ouch. You're so ill man, teach me. |
It's pretty basic. Rhyme Scheme and Complexity isnt anything much and flow is kinda off at spots. It shows some potential, but oyu need to find your own uniqueness, this is too generic and bland.
Study the basics, incoperate some wordaply and all that. |
^^^co sign........generic......verrrry generic......u got the basics down.....aka the cake....now u need some sprinkles and some icing and maybe a few candles to decorate it....in rap terms...
metaphors....similies....wordplay.....punchlines.. .. my diss towards the next generation star trekkies....is a good example of what im tryin to say.......see what i did...and apply to urself...best way to learn is by example sometimes....thats how i did |
Kinda too basic - anything else I was gonna advice you to do was already stated by Masked and Darth, so yeah.
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As it says..Fuck you all....Battle me ;)
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I'll battle you..Set It up..
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I didnt say I would set shit up..I dont do bitch work
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YAWN... get a mic.
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lol this is pure straight up and down in and out garbage. MUAH
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omg I love that shit,
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As I said...the big mouths in this bitch set it up. I'll take you all on. Only text...mics broke.
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mics broke? so dont talk shit lol. well uh how do i set upp. and fuck u too
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