80BarSpecial.revolver-TonySelf
 

Something i dug out from the trenches did it a while back decent lil joint spit the feed return the feed holla


Hit this shit

LINKS-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215766


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215017

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Sounds real south style man. Your vocals remind me of someone......But I cant put my finger on it...

It wasnt bad dude, I had trouble making out all the lyrics.. Might wanna work on ya pronunciation. Quality was good, vocals were aiight. Rhymes sounded like you went fairly light on the multi-syllable shit.

All I can really say is you needa work on your style and make it stand out from the crowd more... Your shit would be marketable, but theres a lot of cats on this level.....Thats all..

lol @ dat shit being a ringtone

AIYO...dawg...ur vocals sound bare as hell...and that's weird cuz they're obviously dubbed...Hmmmm

something is lackin in ur production...volume perhaps...shit came in mad low...everythig...beat and all...

ur flow is nice on this though...Delivery is bordering on monotonous at times...

good flip of the lyrics with the fast flow...I'm likin

to be honest...80 bars is too much damn work for me...I did 60 and was outta breath...so props on that...

this sounds hot though...would be even hotter with a certain LETTER flowin on it wit u

the "TONY SELF" effect was too loud

WOW...this track actually made me wanna listen to the whole thing...most tracks I can tell what it's about in the first 30 seconds and don't wanna listen any more

so...props on that as well

Nice shit

aight peepin now

Production:The beat is pretty hot..i like the intro and drums were good:8/10

Flow:ya flow was pretty good..you rode the beat pretty well good stuff:7.5/10

Pressense:Def. Ya strong point i could listen too the song the whole way without gettin bored:8.5/10

Emotion:Could be a lil better but it was overall pretty good:7.5/10

Lyrics:Your lyrics weren't too bad but nothin legendary..good stuff tho:7.3/10

Overall:This song is pretty good.....somthin i could play again:7.8/10

Keep um coming man i'm feelin it for sho

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i guess im not rippin threads up enuff to get fed lol