ak23 vs. Potential
 

Rules:
Spit Due 30 Min. After Check In..
No c/v
no d/r
no h/v
Lines: 10- 20 max
3-0 is ko
ight lets do this thang


Win by KO

ak23 spit
 

k i'll spit first. aight here it goes..


aight, you call yourself potential...../
i know people with more potential thats mental in pshyciatric centers/
bitch, you aint got shit../
you dont know what hip hop is../
ak23 is hip hop, the only thing you down with is the 'Kidz Bop' shit../
realize that if i ever seen your eyes, face to face, you'd be bleedin from your thighs, and needin my advice on how to stop it/
i launch shit twords your direction like rockets and you really wanna try and knock this/
why you even you even tryin to spit/
i make you wanna start dying and slit your wrists/
man i know you in your 30's with no life/
gotta lotta money so a ho's ur wife/
just admit it, your spirits diminished/
your nothing, your finished/
after taste of this bitch slappin will stay with you until you have a coffin and your in it/

i didnt agree to 30 minutes...lol...almost 4got bout this match.....well might as well

Started this match weak, didn't manage to 'hold down the fort'
So ima make this battle lyke ur circumcision n cut this shit short
Ya have no skillz...Look at ya verse...do i even need ta explain?
If life's music, ya verses wack......and ya tend to loop the refrain
Someone told you ya good? yave been a ploy in an elaborate con
Must be R.Kell's publicist cuz ya think u'll get famous when shitted on
Waste a verse to disperse wackness' son, shit gettin tired of this
When his verse only got two options.................. be shit or miss
Switchin gear for a minute so let me just pull back the clutch
Impersonated ya gurl in this battle......and left me untouched
FUCK, Next time battle newbs bitch so murders will never occur
and ya kant see iLL.....so i guess ima have to end this verse in a blur

Openor: Tie
Structure: potential
Flow: tie
Personals: tie
Punches: potential
Close: Pontential
vote: potential

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Someone told you ya good? yave been a ploy in an elaborate con
Must be R.Kell's publicist cuz ya think u'll get famous when shitted on
~~~nice shit, good punch, funny as hell.
Switchin gear for a minute so let me just pull back the clutch
Impersonated ya gurl in this battle......and left me untouched
~~~funny punch, nice first line leading in made filler though, butnice.
decent verse for prolly not takin any time wit it at all, but i didnt see any wordplay, hook some of that up next time.

ak23*(**(*
awful structure
aight, you call yourself potential...../
i know people with more potential thats mental in pshyciatric centers/
~~ya only punch but it was a pretty good one, 5 more of these u woulda been right there, good.

the rest u had way too much self glorification with the......... im hip hop your not, sayin u cool and shit aint battlin. and ya,just admit it, your spirits diminished/
your nothing, your finished/
thats mad filler. decent verse u got a clue what u doin thats good, but add more puches fix stucture and leave out self glorification, u should at least have a punche every other line maybe lead into the punch with the first line bein a self glorifing one but thats it keep that shit out as much as u can.

vote-potential.

good job not pm for votes, thats illegal preciate it, it says in the rulez when u vote u can drop ya link or have battles in ya sig only way ta follow it.this was a complete honest vote. one, hit my battles up in my sig. peace

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Decent Battle......
AK23: your opener was better than potential's because you came hard dissin, but i think that ur structure was kind of hard to follow and decipher, you had good punches on potential's name which were funny, but because your structure was hard to follow....ima give this to potential
potential: your opener was kinda weak, which u admitted(kind a funny, honest)but you made up for it with a nice fow in your style, and you had some good punches too:
the r.kelly punch was nice, and the punch about his girl- both dope, and both had good wordplay......
VOTE:POTENTIAL