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09-20-07 12:40 PM

Aphillyate (0-1) vs. don cardyac (0-1)
 
It Was A Good First Week Of Pre-Seasons, But... We've only jumped up by one member, so we have a 3 way match, and I expect EVERYONE to vote on it. I will monitor the three way battle as well as every battle for invalid/valid votes, but the 3-way match, just like every other one in the future, must have every battler vote on it, because of it's Rules. Here are the 3-way rules for all week 1 members & K-M:

All three members check in, (in whichever order) and the first person who checked in must drop first (After everyone else has checked in). Then the last two can drop whenever, whoever's first is first. But make sure EVERYTHING is on time! 3-Way matches are hosted and will NOT take any no shows/late writers. If you are late, I simply won't allow you to drop, and you will get two losses. So tell me ahead of time before you no show to save your ass.

The winner of a 3-way match gets 2 wins, the two losers get 2 losses. It's risky but worth it. Good Luck!

Battles Up: Thursday Mid-Day, 12:00-2:00 PM Eastern.
Check-ins Due: Saturday Morning, 5 AM Eastern.
Punches Due: Monday Morning, 5 AM Eastern.
Battle Closes: Wednesday Midnight Eastern.

Cola 09-20-07 02:08 PM

sup you Don...checkity checkity

Cola 09-20-07 07:36 PM

Y D.C. keep droppin keystyles? Aint nobody looked
Cuz only time people associted ya name with greatness...
....is when they talkin comic books

Cola 09-21-07 11:33 PM

don...wtf...were you at/??

don cardyac 09-22-07 11:53 PM

you cant even aphilliate with the freshest/
only time u get PROPS on ur clothes is pullin da BAMMA card, playin' "GESTURES"/

Cola 09-23-07 09:33 AM

vote up!!!!!!!!!

Ransum 09-23-07 01:43 PM

Y D.C. keep droppin keystyles? Aint nobody looked
Cuz only time people associted ya name with greatness...
....is when they talkin comic books

1st line: decent flow... a bit wor word-play... aight set up...
2ed line: a bit streched... not a hard punch but decent...


you cant even aphilliate with the freshest/
only time u get PROPS on ur clothes is pullin da BAMMA card, playin' "GESTURES"/

1st line: short decent flow aight set up...
2ed line: a bit streched, decent punch....


there can only be 1 winner: aphill

for having a bit of word-play and a decent punch to follow up that hit a bit harder to me then don....

09-23-07 02:00 PM

v/ - Don Cardyac


Edit:

Explanation.

Y D.C. keep droppin keystyles? Aint nobody looked
Cuz only time people associted ya name with greatness...
....is when they talkin comic books

^ No.

you cant even aphilliate with the freshest/
only time u get PROPS on ur clothes is pullin da BAMMA card, playin' "GESTURES"/

^ I get it, shitty execution, shitty grammar, shitty set up and shitty everything, but at least I get it.

Gj don.

ThatsWhatSheSaid 09-23-07 02:03 PM

Not really feeling either, V- Aphillyate, Cardyac has a wierd structure, both had flow n what not, but i dont know just wasnt feelin either, Aphill had the better punch of the two

Spektikul 09-23-07 05:10 PM

Not to be dissin or anything but i thought both structures were really bad and neither punch was hitting. you guys gotta work on making your bars shorter and right to the punch. try removing words or re-wording it to make it shorter. also, you dont need any "quotations" or CAPS in it to emphasize two things together, write it out so that we can understand the punch without that, if you understand.

I thought you guys were both pretty even, but not so much in a good way. however, i feel that if i had to pick which was better id say aphill's took it by a hair. take my advice and come harder next week boys, word.

v/ aphill..........

SKAAL 09-23-07 08:12 PM

i thought this was kinda plain aphills was kinda weak but don's punch made me laugh cuz i understand the lingo but set up was terrible but it still was the one to get a reaction out of me that comic book line just didn't dig deep enopugh you did the research aphill but you should've came a lil harder than comic books so

vote= don

El Taco 09-23-07 08:31 PM

vote: don.. nobody talks about comic books.

KM 09-23-07 08:37 PM

ehhh both punches were almost even.....i dont think don set his punch up right but he was getting somewhere with it so no doubt it gots potential for being creative.....i thought aphills punch was a little basic but it was straight to the point...i have to with aphill.....

Cola 09-23-07 09:26 PM

wtf? to all the poeople dissing the comic book punch??? its a fucking Name play on him...so suck my dick ...also, he dropped like 6 keystyles that no one looks at EVER...hense my first punch....

3-3 uppin

KM 09-23-07 09:45 PM

your so emotional aphill lmaoooo


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