(0-0) Daz Vs E.C (0-0)
 

checkin in... g'luck daz :thumbup:

messing with me is consiquential, ill demolish your dentals, i consist essentials,
ill bring the facts of credential, thinking he shows potential, lets learn fundimentals,
you dont wanna show me no disrepect, his dicks erect, come near me and ill snap ur neck,
my punches connect, picking you up the council must be wrecked, leave you full of neglect,
you might be known, ill smuggle in 2 bottle that connect to your dome, just like al capone,
bin hit dat much u'll be pissin out bladder stones, u get so scared ur shadow walks u home,
your unknown to da game, i check ur profile all i saw was ur name, u appear to be lame,
im be somthin u neva became, wit ur fake proclaims, take cova cuz i got u sighted-n-aimed,


aight mayne... i dont need 3 days to think of a verse even if i am going to lose... least i tried..

Explanations:

* he is in the council...
*al capone back in the day he used to smuggle in alcohol so i went off that
*in his profile it only has his name...


and thats about it... hope u like :thumbup:

Fixed your structure so its easier to read
-kon

check.you shouldve taken more tyme.......
ill drop tonight.......

vote goes to daz for using multis over 1 syllable.....this was easy to choose......EC at most points used 1 syllable multis.....or 1 words multis.......Daz had atleast 3 words in all of his.....so this easily goes to daz for actually using true multis......daz also had a better battle verse that hit harder.......what more can i explain? daz wins for throwing better multis and having a better battle verse...

I Like Daz Verse Decent Multies....................

vote disqualified.....unexplained LOL
-kon

messing with me is consiquential, ill demolish your dentals, i consist essentials,
ill bring the facts of credential, thinking he shows potential, lets learn fundimentals,
Good use of multi's but it didnt make any sense at all. 5/10
you dont wanna show me no disrepect, his dicks erect, come near me and ill snap ur neck,
my punches connect, picking you up the council must be wrecked, leave you full of neglect,
Umm this was decent. nothing special..5/10
you might be known, ill smuggle in 2 bottle that connect to your dome, just like al capone,
bin hit dat much u'll be pissin out bladder stones, u get so scared ur shadow walks u home,
lol NO this was wack. and it didnt make sense 4/10
your unknown to da game, i check ur profile all i saw was ur name, u appear to be lame,
im be somthin u neva became, wit ur fake proclaims, take cova cuz i got u sighted-n-aimed,
you threw a personal in their. wuld be good if this was a personal batle. 4/10

E.C: mayn you just threw shit everywhere haha....you didnt even make sense. but you did have good use of multi's but it doesnt matter if you just rhyme words....

18/40

Daz

Is it WORDPLAY YOU SEEK, ………or gay FOREPLAY WITH GEEKS,
You must STAY WITH BEATS..?, cuz I don’t PRAY FOR WEAKS,(weeks)
yeah this was decent...nice multi and punch 7/10
While writing were you CHAFFED FOR AIR…?...four me to “LAUGH IS FAIR”,
E=MC SQUARE…? ya missin structure cuz ya equations ONLY HALF THERE,
this was aiight nothing special 6/10
When STEPPIN-TRY SIGHT, im discountin ya thread like REFFING TAI(tie)FIGHTS,
Ill be POLITE Your twice the pussy I thought, like JOGGING BYE DYKES,(bi-dykes)
umm no...... 5/10
This LEAGUE,…. im IN IT TO STAY….cuz It only takes a MINUTE TO SAY,
I’de MIMIC YOUR WAYS, but to spit it would be over the LIMITS OF GAY,!!
ok closer..nothing tooo good 6/10

overall your shit was aiight. you only used 2 multi's but i wont count it this time. next time you might get disqualified. but you have to use 3 multi's

24/40

Vote DAZ

ok i know this is a multi league and both had them but daz had ill punches too as usual while ec stayed more on the multis daz had better flow and syallabel count it flowed smooth as you read it ec sounded force as you read his plus lack of punches as well gives daz my vote
voe daz

nice closer....
ya verse isnt really what is expected but i thinks its good overall



messing with me is consiquential, ill demolish your dentals, i consist essentials,
ill bring the facts of credential, thinking he shows potential, lets learn fundimentals,
......mulit's yes...but point? no
you dont wanna show me no disrepect, his dicks erect, come near me and ill snap ur neck,
my punches connect, picking you up the council must be wrecked, leave you full of neglect,
multis again but once again no fire in the lines
you might be known, ill smuggle in 2 bottle that connect to your dome, just like al capone,
bin hit dat much u'll be pissin out bladder stones, u get so scared ur shadow walks u home,
decent line, like the Capone line...a lil better
your unknown to da game, i check ur profile all i saw was ur name, u appear to be lame,
im be somthin u neva became, wit ur fake proclaims, take cova cuz i got u sighted-n-aimed,
threw a personal in there, pretty good..
overall ya verse lacked a point thats my my
vote goes to.........Daz

E.C. : You're verse had no direction... The multis werent that great either. A lot of the stuff in there was very forced, weak punches... etc.

Daz: Better contructed verse... better multis... better everything..

so this goes to daz

EC: Sorry cuz, i wasnt feeling ya verse. It seemd like you just threw multis in the verse but not at him. Add in some personals and heavy punches in the next round and it will be better. Ya multis were good tho. There is a lot of talent there in that respect.

Daz: Nice verse indeed. Your opener was damn sexy! i liked the punches and multis were v. nice. Not really anything i could tell you to do to improve in this league.

I look forward to wen we meet. :thumbup: I just hope i have improved enough by then

shit. sorry. VOTE: DAZ

ight man gd lookins... upiinnn

k, lol,....its 6-0,......votes arent needed any longer on this battle...
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E.C, goodluck for the remainder of the league...