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"Lost"...A Must Peep For Sure...
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Word, I just heard this beat and started writing immediatly... Some shit that people can hopefully relate to. Leave some links, and I will return the favor. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220210 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219693 |
beat sikk.........................
flows nicely..................... voice is illy:cool:...................... lyrics r nice......................... deleivery is hott.............................. hook is nice tooo................... quality was good on this.................... prolly my fav track from you good ish 9/10 nice drop Feed used 1/26/06 "i dont need" |
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first off the beat is sick I love beats with guitars.. now to the track
Flow is solid.. the back up vocals for the first verse were off a bit at the beginning but you came back. Lyrically good. The hook is dope.. very deep. You have the ability to make people listen cause the content is there. You jus need to develop a style like I told you on AIM. Second verse is dope, but the back up vocals were off a bit at points. You gotta keep the same tempo of the flow in the verse it's hard during dubs because your stopping and going.. but you gotta spit the verse in your head while your recording it and spit it how you feel it nah mean. Other than that the joitn is very solid you're getting better and better fam. Good shit |
definately the content is there your flow overall is good more command is needed to grab this shit and smack it around OWN THIS SHIT dont just lease it my man beat iz tyte overall serious display of raw talent just needs more polish keep blazin em
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beats nice man...u sound a lil like ona my buddies...delevery is good,hook is cool n shit,some dark shit,flow is a bit rough...lyrics r consistant,nuthin realy stood out but they was good through out...some good philosiphys here...i take back the nuthin stood out part..the third verse went a bit deeper...nice way to end it man
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wow this beats sick!
lol, whats good wit all these christian tracks? haha flow- pretty nice, off a few times emotion- cool delivery- nice lyrics- pretty dope quality- blah.. needs to get better hook- not really feelin it, doesnt have me vibin, not catchy enough your voice is str8, just need to gett better quality n a better hook. overall traks hot tho.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220500 RTF |
werd nice flow, haha i made a track on this yesterday:( im probly buying this beat andgonna use it for my demo, anyway nice flow and nice lyrics man, beat is jsut fucking illnes, pretty dope hook man, you impressed me honestly, still your ps mic? meh who cares pretty dope still, RTF on Its My Turn
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beat is ok not really feeling it quality is a little bit better lyrics were pretty good for waht it was could have been a little bit more creative flow could be improved a bit delivery was pretty good you could ahve been a little more agessive with it overall id give this track 7/10 |
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nice track....nice beat ya flow was nice hmmm iono could be perfected more witha better rhyme scheme but Good enuff lol
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beat is reflective
ur flow is adequate...nothing major either way...it gets the job done delivery could be way more expressive some of ur dubs were out of sync I liked the lyrics and the hook very introspective and somewhat thought provoking Good drop homie 1 |
not feelin the beat so much...not into acoustic guitar so i'm biased but it does do the job i'll give it that (as far as it feeling deep)....Yeah i like that hook and it is something i can relate to and i know everyone will at one point in their life...
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