Die With Me(Ill rtf ASAP)
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3881635

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...067#post2735067
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227555

iight uppin now

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playing.....

nice beat. like the "die with me vocals"

damn this is a solid track, nice flow. you have a weirdly original accent.

Ayo, on the real get at me for a remix of this.
why the fuck is this slept on. Good track bro.

i liek the die with me vocals, too.....

i personally dont really liek the whoel accent thing tho, lol.....but i like the originality an dhte concept your going for on this track.....i realize your flows jsut tryna match the beat but it sounds kidna choppy.....other than that its not that bad....

rtf plz
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227580

thanks alot, upp

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listening...

Intro...singing is hot, verse starts, flow is on, presence is felt man, and your emotion is nice...Flow slips a few places..Hook is dope...Verse 2, pretty much the same as verse 1...

Overall, solid drop.

thx bro........

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RTF


This reminds me a lil of Black RObs Whoa.... instead of Whoa..... its "Wit me"....


lol


i like the way you layered the Die wit me vocals....

this was very diffrent... i aint gonna blow sunshine up your ass... it was aight... a bit dark... but for what it was.... i mean... you attacked your concept head on... so i give you that.... i mean... you doin it kid... still a lil green... but ... hey... are you from the UK... cuz you have a tiny accent on this track... on some pronounciation... it was a lil funky... but.... your goin from beat maker to emcee.... so... keep droppin


7.5/10

thanks bro, thanks

didn't know u rapped...thought u jus made beats so figured I'd peep ya out.....beat is koo...u make it? hook is bleh....I ono u don't sound to comfortable on the mic...ya flow is a lil mechanic sounding....an the "wit me" over an over got tiresome...shoulda switched it up afetr 8 bars then brought it back if u wanted to emphasize....ya breathe control, had sum foul ups here an there...u was cutting off some words cuz u was short on wind...def need to sure that up..aww man this hook really hurt track...if u had a ill hook on this beat u coulda goo goo an ga ga'd on the verses an song woulda been tight...so def a decent track wit alot of potential if u re-rerecorded an fixed the foul ups an writing repetiveness of verses an reworte hook an delivered it ALOT stronger....but def keep it up fam u got a good sound to ya if u polish it.......1\

RTF:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227798

iight thanks man, i returned the favor