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FlowIntelligent. 04-27-05 01:41 PM

29. Ambient Vs. 36. WickedClown
 
Rules:

Battles go up Wednesday, Check Ins due on Friday before 11:59 PM EST, Verses due on Sunday before 11:59 PM EST.

10 Lines
No Biting
No Recycling
No Feeding

Only Voting Council May Vote On The Battle.


Good Luck

Wickedclown 04-27-05 11:13 PM

checkin in..........

Ambient 04-28-05 07:00 AM

word.....check.

Ambient 04-30-05 12:00 PM

im fluent with the skills, thats right man, you dig?
& after this battle they can put ur name on the gravestone in ya sig
the big leagues are not ur leagues, your name should stay hid
man u couldn't make a splash... even after i threw you off a bridge
im often compared to mortal kombat warriors, u know it kid
im the god of thunder... the only thing you raiden... is the fridge
u'll never cross the finish, im not gonna let you start B
but ur def. the illest... when its comes to kids birthday partys
life can be shitty and blunt... but always give it a stab
& remember you'll always get the sharp end... of w/e weapon i have

word.

Wickedclown 05-01-05 06:08 PM

I drop bombs that explode with pure Ambient light
say goodbye to RV bitch cause your dyin tonight
im ending your sight like retarded kids staring into the sun
ya shits done, the odds of you winnin are slim to none
so hey annie get ya gun and join the fun that is your demise
time to make you realize that your the essence of all i despise
you characterize all that is wrong with this game
hopin for fame but wont reach any sort of acclaim
im scramblin ya brains and servin em' with breakfast toast
everyone said youd win this but you fell asleep at yo' command post

Adam 05-01-05 06:22 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ambient
im fluent with the skills, thats right man, you dig?
& after this battle they can put ur name on the gravestone in ya sig
Second Line Off Flow...but nice punch...6/10
the big leagues are not ur leagues, your name should stay hid
man u couldn't make a splash... even after i threw you off a bridge
Could Have Been Worded Better...5/10
im often compared to mortal kombat warriors, u know it kid
im the god of thunder... the only thing you raiden... is the fridge
Hahah, Wordplay there was aight...6/10
u'll never cross the finish, im not gonna let you start B
but ur def. the illest... when its comes to kids birthday partys
Not feeling...4/10
life can be shitty and blunt... but always give it a stab
& remember you'll always get the sharp end... of w/e weapon i have
I laughed....6/10

word.

Overall: 27/50



Quote:
Originally Posted by Wickedclown
I drop bombs that explode with pure Ambient light
say goodbye to RV bitch cause your dyin tonight
Simple...4/10
im ending your sight like retarded kids staring into the sun
ya shits done, the odds of you winnin are slim to none
Not Hard Hitting...5/10
so hey annie get ya gun and join the fun that is your demise
time to make you realize that your the essence of all i despise
Throw Punches, Not Threats....4/10
you characterize all that is wrong with this game
hopin for fame but wont reach any sort of acclaim
Nope....4/10
im scramblin ya brains and servin em' with breakfast toast
everyone said youd win this but you fell asleep at yo' command post
Meh.....6/10

Overall: 23/50


You both came way weaker than you should have...but Ambient wins due to harder punches...

Vote:Ambient

...Voke... 05-01-05 11:03 PM

Ambiet......
im fluent with the skills, thats right man, you dig?
& after this battle they can put ur name on the gravestone in ya sig
WTF? its already there hes an alias you dumbass you didnt research
-3 points BOOOOOOOOO

the big leagues are not ur leagues, your name should stay hid
man u couldn't make a splash... even after i threw you off a bridge
played as fuck.........BOOOO
im often compared to mortal kombat warriors, u know it kid
im the god of thunder... the only thing you raiden... is the fridge
wordplay but gay........
u'll never cross the finish, im not gonna let you start B
but ur def. the illest... when its comes to kids birthday partys
wtf? i should stop reading
life can be shitty and blunt... but always give it a stab
& remember you'll always get the sharp end... of w/e weapon i have
not even a punch.....

i hated this verse like RV hates on the Q

1.5/10

Wicked Clown:

I drop bombs that explode with pure Ambient light
say goodbye to RV bitch cause your dyin tonight
not really a punch.......
im ending your sight like retarded kids staring into the sun
ya shits done, the odds of you winnin are slim to none
a punch, had potential to be better
so hey annie get ya gun and join the fun that is your demise
time to make you realize that your the essence of all i despise
an insult kinda a punch.........
you characterize all that is wrong with this game
hopin for fame but wont reach any sort of acclaim
just a statement.....

im scramblin ya brains and servin em' with breakfast toast
everyone said youd win this but you fell asleep at yo' command post
another statement no punch

you had a better verse but both came weak, seen better from wicked.....alot better

4.5/10

V/Wicked Clown

diman 05-02-05 02:59 PM

Ambient
im fluent with the skills, thats right man, you dig?
& after this battle they can put ur name on the gravestone in ya sig
letter grade = C-
the big leagues are not ur leagues, your name should stay hid
man u couldn't make a splash... even after i threw you off a bridge
what were you thinking?
im often compared to mortal kombat warriors, u know it kid
im the god of thunder... the only thing you raiden... is the fridge
ok ok. ill count it.
u'll never cross the finish, im not gonna let you start B
but ur def. the illest... when its comes to kids birthday partys
never end a line with a pronoun.
life can be shitty and blunt... but always give it a stab
& remember you'll always get the sharp end... of w/e weapon i have
was this a lecture?

*i am really confused with ya verse.
i dont know if you were advising him
or expressing how you feel about your
own talent. i mean, it was complete
garbage...but it wasnt at all dope.

[b]Wicked

I drop bombs that explode with pure Ambient light
say goodbye to RV bitch cause your dyin tonight
looks like a bar from 50 single (im not implying you bit, im using it as a parallel)
im ending your sight like retarded kids staring into the sun
ya shits done, the odds of you winnin are slim to none
good flow, bar was real fundamental though
so hey annie get ya gun and join the fun that is your demise
time to make you realize that your the essence of all i despise
make us believe you actually wanna win cat
you characterize all that is wrong with this game
hopin for fame but wont reach any sort of acclaim
uhhh yea, if its a setting for the following line.
im scramblin ya brains and servin em' with breakfast toast
everyone said youd win this but you fell asleep at yo' command post
approach was fire, the end was shit.

*cant believe im giving this to you, but
i can say you didnt come as half assed as
your opponent, nothin in his verse stood out.
and close to nothing in ya verse stands out. but
im gonna give it to you, for simple hitters and
good flow.

vote: wicked


not good verses yall, good luck to both.

-eph

Oz™ 05-02-05 03:49 PM

AMBIENT:

im fluent with the skills, thats right man, you dig?
& after this battle they can put ur name on the gravestone in ya sig
ehhhh...that was decent...4/10
the big leagues are not ur leagues, your name should stay hid
man u couldn't make a splash... even after i threw you off a bridge
nah..........3/10
im often compared to mortal kombat warriors, u know it kid
im the god of thunder... the only thing you raiden... is the fridge
lol.......6/10
u'll never cross the finish, im not gonna let you start B
but ur def. the illest... when its comes to kids birthday partys
nah..............4/10
life can be shitty and blunt... but always give it a stab
& remember you'll always get the sharp end... of w/e weapon i have
decent closer...5/10

OVERALL-22/50

WICKEDCLOWN:

I drop bombs that explode with pure Ambient light
say goodbye to RV bitch cause your dyin tonight
weak punch......3/10
im ending your sight like retarded kids staring into the sun
ya shits done, the odds of you winnin are slim to none
first line was decent...second line was weak...4/10
so hey annie get ya gun and join the fun that is your demise
time to make you realize that your the essence of all i despise
decent punch...nice vocab........5/10
you characterize all that is wrong with this game
hopin for fame but wont reach any sort of acclaim
no punch there....2/10
im scramblin ya brains and servin em' with breakfast toast
everyone said youd win this but you fell asleep at yo' command post
decent closer.....5/10

OVERALL-19/50

Vote-Ambient

FlowIntelligent. 05-02-05 10:47 PM

Ambient:

im fluent with the skills, thats right man, you dig?
& after this battle they can put ur name on the gravestone in ya sig
^^first line sefl glorification decent punch 4/10
the big leagues are not ur leagues, your name should stay hid
man u couldn't make a splash... even after i threw you off a bridge
^^decent 5/10
im often compared to mortal kombat warriors, u know it kid
im the god of thunder... the only thing you raiden... is the fridge
^^lmfao 9/10
u'll never cross the finish, im not gonna let you start B
but ur def. the illest... when its comes to kids birthday partys
^^nice bar 7/10
life can be shitty and blunt... but always give it a stab
& remember you'll always get the sharp end... of w/e weapon i have
^^nice closer 6/10

Overall: 31/50 (62%)

WickedClown:

I drop bombs that explode with pure Ambient light
say goodbye to RV bitch cause your dyin tonight
^^wack 1/10
im ending your sight like retarded kids staring into the sun
ya shits done, the odds of you winnin are slim to none
^^ehh 3/10
so hey annie get ya gun and join the fun that is your demise
time to make you realize that your the essence of all i despise
^^stop with the unnecessary multies they kill your punch 2/10
you characterize all that is wrong with this game
hopin for fame but wont reach any sort of acclaim
^^no 1/10
im scramblin ya brains and servin em' with breakfast toast
everyone said youd win this but you fell asleep at yo' command post
^^ehh 3/10

Overall: 10/50 (20%)

Vote: Ambient

Wickedclown 05-02-05 10:49 PM

lmao fuck you faggot. u got beef wit me any way.. u always talkin down to me and your the onlyone to give his verse such a high rating. thats fuckin bullshit and u know it faggot

FlowIntelligent. 05-02-05 10:55 PM

Wow kid stop freeposting. I have no beef with you, that was in the past. Your verse was wack, you used to be better. Youre not dope anymore. It was my opinion and my vote, i have beef with no one in this tourney, because it is the internet so come to grips with that also.

Wickedclown 05-02-05 11:01 PM

dude look at everyone elses posts.. they all rated our shit pretty much equal and you rate his 21 points higher than mine? wtf.?.

Ambient 05-03-05 07:50 AM

lmfao... now who's bitching? ^

Wickedclown 05-03-05 12:02 PM

....wow... anyone else gonna fuckin vote on this shit?


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