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Dabatos 07-14-08 01:17 PM

Got Soul vs malicious - Round 1
 
Got Soul vs malicious

Rules:
Check-In's must be done by Wednesday.
Verses must be posted by Friday.
Votes must be submitted by Sunday.
By midnight Sunday pacific time, the votes will be counted.

Lines: 20 - 40 Lines Max.
Topic: Closed Eyes

Every participant must vote on a minimum of 3 battles. Please vote on battles that don't have a lot of votes, it doesn't do any good if a battle with 10 votes gets another while one battle has under 2 votes.


Ysdat 07-14-08 04:43 PM

Check. Good luck.

Malicious 07-14-08 07:42 PM

Check................

Ysdat 07-18-08 12:34 AM

Closed Eyes
By Got Soul? ©


Some say there’s 7 Wonders of the Natural Earth, I beg to differ.


Beautiful melody dances with echoes in a fine harmonic tune
Each octave rotates perfect, naturally synchronized with the moon
His blinking lives up the room, a talented mind stuck in gloom
Finger tips delicately placed releasing a guy’s subtle mood
Swaying ecstatic brain left to right, but he’s far from saying no
Amazing Grace blessed the night, his heart rate pace is slow…..

*pause*


Hands slap down violently, attacking, abusing blacks and whites
A seriously passionate movement in the heat of the act tonight
Majors and minors released to the ear when extracted right
Gasp for hype, magic created with the exact same hands that type
Explosive notes openly written to a crowed of perpetual civilians
Escaping a force fed reality, a mans heart isn’t beating, its living this
Excitement exits the voice box to dance dramatically with tonsils
Lights dim synchronized with a ere silence …everything’s gone still
Whispers vibrate a vibrant arena, humans stand anxiously impatient
Low voices turn to chants, questions ask ‘were the mans face is’
Blinding lights shine like crepuscular rays, reality confronts the crowed
A man sits dark glasses skill level that would make god proud
Finger tips caressing keys in alignment, creating heavens leading note
Deceptive cadence anticipates smoothly, creating a breathing hope
Semitones hang in the balance like a talented tight rope trapeze
One man generating an orchestral similarity produced frequent with ease
Blissful sounds of Enharmonic Intervals emit joy and excitement
Vision of Espressivo, views of love, from a man who lives sightless



Dedicated to Stevie Wonder, The man that see’s more than you and I


Even though he lives with Closed Eyes.

Ysdat 07-19-08 05:08 PM

Go fuck yourself.

WhoAmI 07-20-08 06:03 AM

well it's sunday now so im assuming malicious loses by no show

v/got soul

XM 07-20-08 09:19 AM

v- my homie soul nice drop too

Keith Moon 07-20-08 06:03 PM

good job soul....

Nitrogen 07-21-08 09:28 AM

nice drop man, wished he wouldve dropped, its always better to see a good verse going up against another verse

Keith Moon 07-21-08 12:45 PM

Got soul advances


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