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Parallel vs Dio Deus
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12-20 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topic: Reality's Choice Crew battle: The Establishment vs. NOK Out Kingz there is 2 days after checking in, check in will be done as soon as possible Minimum posts to vote: 410 Check in by: 02-21-05 at 03:14 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
Parallel has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-18-05 03:33 PM.
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i know your gonna duck me so just say so and decline the battle then it will be over like that
like damn newbs |
..Reality’s Choice.. I don’t think that anyone understands why I was Born My parents might, but I feel like I’m alone in a Dorn If theirs a reason fate will answer, all the Questions If an answer, I hope I’ll get reasonable Suggestions Only reality can answer what most never Believed Only one can show, everything they could Achieve Soon when people come to realize, others will See Any question anyone has asked, will then be Free The people locked up in prison will get Answered The less that don’t believe, create such a Hazard Myself & others that relate, know the magic of Fate All Human beings will soon come to see the Gate And all that come to see the gate will be set Free People that show Emotion fast, know the Degree Reality is everywhere, & is still yet to be Answered.. The End... |
Dio Deus has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 01:39 AM.
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good one! :thumbup:
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Reality's choice
reality's choice, what's real? what's reality? is reality good, or is reality felony, I'll never see, cause no-one knows, we can say we do, when someone goes, he will go to heaven, and he will burn in hell, how do we know that? it's impossible to know, you can't learn it well, was that tidal wave destined, on purpose? or some excidental shit, how come the big lord god, can't handle it is there destiny? is there god? is there reality? is it not? how come, evryhting goes wrong when you believe in the fate of god I'ma make my own decicions, there ain't no reality alive if I wanna be, I can be everything, if my friends stand me by side Reality doesn't excist, it can't choos for us cause if he could, it would've been good for us so ban it out of your spirit, ban it out of your mind the only thing you have is your friends for life............................. (now think about that) |
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whoa you droped guy theres no verse there wtf?
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..Reality’s Choice.. I don’t think that anyone understands why I was Born My parents might, but I feel like I’m alone in a Dorn If theirs a reason fate will answer, all the Questions If an answer, I hope I’ll get reasonable Suggestions Only reality can answer what most never Believed Only one can show, everything they could Achieve Soon when people come to realize, others will See Any question anyone has asked, will then be Free The people locked up in prison will get Answered The less that don’t believe, create such a Hazard Myself & others that relate, know the magic of Fate All Human beings will soon come to see the Gate And all that come to see the gate will be set Free People that show Emotion fast, know the Degree Reality is everywhere, & is still yet to be Answered.. The End... |
This was feedback posted for Parallel
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Voted For: Parallel
one-sided vote... parallel u had an aight story, seen betta topics from you...but the story was aight, and the flow to it was okay...vocab was good here too...decent drop 6/10 dio u had an aight drop, fix ur structure here, ur vocab was good, and the flow was aight, but u could've done better wit the story though 4/10 |
Voted For: Parallel
well...this was a very good battle...very close too let me tell yall the difference though: dio deus- you got there, but u discussed some shit about today's world...i don knwo but i think the task was to talk about reality the meaning and in general..flow was aite...rhyme scheme was off at times parellel- your's to me was on point...you didn't discuss today's problem and i was feeling ur message more than i was doin with dio deus. ur verse really spoke about wat reality really was and not how it is being performed today vote- parallel |
This was feedback posted for Parallel
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