HellsFire vs HopesFall
 

Rules:

Battles Go Up Friday
Check In Due Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Verses Due Tuesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time

20 Lines Minimum
40 Lines Maximum

No Biting
No Recycling
Do Not Go Over The Line Limit Or Under The Line Limit
Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines

You Must Vote On 3 Battles Per Week And Edit Them Into Your Check-In.. If You Dont Do So, Youre Banned From The Tourney The Following Week


Check-Ins are now MANDATORY. Check-Ins are due by sunday at midnight. If you don't it's considered a no-show.

Hopesfall has untill monday.

Topic: Hour Glass

Hopesfall wont be able to check in until Monday..

He can only come on during school lunch time for like, 10 minutes..

So give him until Monday till check in, yo.

He'll show up.

no problem.......

check in in yall hour glass is droppin sand only grains away from my next drop

hello, i made it on sunday :)

Good job Hope...

thanks, nice to have backup.. lol.

"Love Is An Hour Glass"


Warm, the description of the night and our feelings,
A small gasp, as he lowers and begins kneeling,
The soundtrack of the beach plays parallel to their tune,
Emotions given, letting go of his heart and letting it bloom,
A hug sprung with a simultaneous “yes”…
“Thank you, for everything” she says, as her arms are caressed,
Hands resting on her back, speeding pulse as heads lift,
A gaze into the stars followed by the touching of lips,
Hand in hand they walk down the beach, they look at their best,
A childish thump, as hearts pound nervously in their chests,
Until the day, that the bridge was burned behind him,
And she was left on the other side, practically blinded,
The fight broke out that Saturday evening, for stupid reasons,
And he screamed “I’m moving out!” but she didn’t believe him,
She never thought, he would step out of the door,
But he did, and with him, not just his furniture, but so much more,
He left with her love, abandoned at the core, she collapsed,
On the couch as time passed, the concept of divorce, she couldn’t grasp,
Her past, with men was such a blast, but she sacrificed it all,
And in return, she got a cold voice in the phone once the lawyer called,
And said he was filing for divorce, she couldn’t breathe, such a lung cut,
Crushed by the emotionless tone in the lawyers voice… she hung-up,
It was all crushed to pieces, look what he did to her heart,
It bled on the floor, as he pounced… and tore it apart,
Love is two people, carrying each others weight,
Love would not be an issue, if we discarded the feeling of hate,
Love is an hour glass, or with some people a crisscrossed basket,
But for those who can’t take it, it’s easily torn and made of plastic,
She lost his touch, and she doesn’t feel like she did to begin,
Would you believe her if she said… that she once loved him…

yo i need a day more to drop am sick today and have to study for a test on top of that so i dont ask for this much but i get a day extension have my verse to ya by 5pm tomorrow

Lol @ "i get a day extension"... Nope, you dont... Hopesfall wins by DQ... Hells fire, your banned from the league for 2 weeks...

Dont forget to drop your links.

will do... im upset i spent the time to do that.

Links good sir...-
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1948423

and...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1948444

the rest of the battles were no-shows so there was no way i could get a link.. sorry.