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Chosen'Paths
Leave's crumble b4 My feet I step Hearin scream's, hearin gat's I dreamt' Noone know's all this pain deep inside-me Only 2 figure out that I had no hand's 2 guide me My soul's on fire With hate and love alike I never had noone, not even an imaginery'Friend'aight Noone to be happy with to love or to hold I just now noticed That I never was "told" When I was young, I neevr heard I love you' Now that I grew up, My heart's grew cold and it's above-you |
wow, a deep message in a small package, nice poem, i felt this, i hope you find the love that is deserving and the courage to say it, good job,keep it up...1
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nice poem, shit was deep, good message and everyything , very creative...lol.
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not too bad i was feelin it somewhat, a lil on and off though
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thanx for the feed, Uppin' I return favors
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Uppin for poetic'critic
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