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(hook)1x
If i demand an invasion ya get invaded
I’ll end ya carrer have ya name faded
If i demand an infletration ya get infeltrated
Ya gota love me but then again i love to be hated
(hook)1x

I start of slow then keep my flow in perfect motion
I capture ur mind set with my rhyme sense causes comotion/
I cause riots lootin shootin my crews in postiton
Ya trippin if u think theres gonna be friction/
Im in the transition to be more then a rap musician
But a activest whos fast to diss the original tradition/
Yall already know that i got that serious ambition
Yo halrey join my crew ud be a great addition/
We need that love even when u thugs like us
We got all the bitches all over us huggin us/
Cause we be bombin rappers send em to the morgue
Knockin on heavens door meetin the lord/
Still feelin the chain reaction of when i get to clappin
Ya wanna know what happens when ya lips get to flappin/
Ya get whipped on wax then ya get face all crack
Then i snap and ya get an all out attack thats exact/
Percise roll the dice or flip the coin ya gonna get destroyed
No choice for me there wont be a beef that ill intentionally aviod/
Ill let my rhymes be deployed I’ll make ya whole carrer null n void
When i see my name misused i get pumped up like i was on a steriod
And i aint gonna be adopted by that happy shit i was born to beef
But it means more to me when when ya rhyme conduct is disorderly/
Cause i well run u out of rap verse like i did punds and convicted
He bit eminem saw it dissed it ripped then kicked him he was a victim/
I love hitin u with syllabels it’s visable that when i lay down my text
U forget the rest dont forget that im not a soldia im the general...X/

(hook)1x
If I demand an invasion ya get invaded
I’ll end ya carrer have ya name faded
If I demand an infletration ya get infeltrated
Ya gota love me but then again i love bein hated
(hook)1x

really good i read and saw alotta multis and good punchlines 7.5/10 keep it up

nice very nice

some plenty of good lines here.

i was feelin this.

6/10

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come on yall uppin this dont sleep on this feed back bitches

uppin ladies......................................

you look like a fool upping and you look even more like an idiot when you drop. Battle me you little cunt.

Yall already know that i got that serious ambition
Yo halrey join my crew ud be a great addition/
We need that love even when u thugs like us
We got all the bitches all over us huggin us/

^^ wasnt feeling that, rest was decent, wasn't the dopest... try corecting your spelling on word before posting ;) lol, good lyrics, would be better spitten on a track, you should do audio, 1 pz.. 6.5/10

thanks for the feed back uppin....................

This was okay at best... 6/10... you prolly could have done better with the wordplay and shit... it was basic... decent punchlines... all in all you can and should do better... but don't worry... that's why we here... to elevate....

rtf... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183752

thanks man if u want some feed back left on somethin just drop a link

ill cjeck that right now man thanks for the feed back