First verse on this site not a noob... READ!
 

This is my first post on this site. Feedback much appreciated.

Without,a shout "of a doubt" I step ON SET like an actor
staying out "and about",not impressed by these rappers
they'll never get "the picture" similar to a TV wit the screen out
flowin off "the richter" labeled a neat freak the way I clean house
wit so much dirt "on my slate" "my soul" could neva be sanitized
got a full meal "on my plate"as "my foes" craniums get vandalize
cuz I'm that guy, that dude these emcees wanna imitate
switch my scheme every sixteen,styles hard to infiltrate
aint no smoother, Imma shooter like the d.c. sniper
strong arm steady, I sit ready to blast on any cypher
flows diverse,to "be first" the tops where i'm going
words disperse, no rehearse on the fly like a boeing
got "pro tools" wit "no rules" my reason is logic
flows acid, by the masses, I don't do it to profit

READ THE RULES!!

I was just saying rappers in general. No disrespect to anyone. As far as it flowing... It seems like it flowed just fine... I could easily flow it out loud without getting caught up on any of the parts...

Thanks for the post.

Still uppin for feedback