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Brydon 03-10-09 06:07 PM

MurDah187 vs Brydon
 
Battle Rules:

8 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Good luck bro! :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-13-09 at 06:07 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 03-10-09 06:15 PM

Brydon has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-09 06:15 PM.

Brydon 03-10-09 06:30 PM

Second battle bro i attack this to try improve your wackness,
but i dunno how you can improve without another 58 battles to practice.
I pro-pack the diss to prove fact kid,your flow not in tact bitch,
but like the kid says u dis-count the votes to get an edge nice switch stitch.
i still flow harder, i still bring the heat im fire,
your effort i admire but your style is so beginning to tire, your better? you liar!
Ima leave this down to the vets to decide to them you cant hide,
but once you've lost and out of ideas dont click on brydon to try and confide.


Quick free style dude goodluck!

System 03-11-09 12:11 AM

MurDaH187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-09 12:11 AM.

MurDaH187 03-11-09 12:18 PM

a keystyle for the hoe, an still i'll be concider a murder'a like jason
so i'll treat'em like he's last few complaint in our battle an ERASE'EM...
so when u see a few Red dots, from info beams on glocks
u'll be standing around woundering if u got Chicken-Pox's....
this aint for the amusment, my hit causes confussion
brains contusion, till u feel like u in the ring fighting illusion....
i masterd abusing, get plasterd when im fumming,so dont stand next-to-him
cuz ya 'Text pushing the boarder-line like rampaging mexican....


** 1st bar= he complaint about a few votes and got'em erase..

the rest is pretty easy to get...

good luck..

Brydon 03-11-09 02:19 PM

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And thats my 1000 post!

Da Problem Child 03-15-09 02:45 PM

Voted For: MurDaH187

a keystyle for the hoe, an still i'll be concider a murder'a like jason
so i'll treat'em like he's last few complaint in our battle an ERASE'EM...
okay opener, could have been a lil' better
so when u see a few Red dots, from info beams on glocks
u'll be standing around woundering if u got Chicken-Pox's....
WHOOH.....nice one
this aint for the amusment, my hit causes confussion
brains contusion, till u feel like u in the ring fighting illusion....
i understand that line but some wont....(word it better next time)
i masterd abusing, get plasterd when im fumming,so dont stand next-to-him
cuz ya 'Text pushing the boarder-line like rampaging mexican....
[b]weak ending...

7.5/10

No need to judge Brydons verse because it really didnt have any good line(no hate)

Brydon 04-14-09 09:20 AM

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Its CJ 04-14-09 04:34 PM

This was feedback posted for MurDaH187
 
the chicken pox bar is nice,good luck to both of you

LPMNDCTE 04-15-09 05:24 PM

Voted For: MurDaH187



Second battle bro i attack this to try improve your wackness,
but i dunno how you can improve without another 58 battles to practice.


descent opener

I pro-pack the diss to prove fact kid,your flow not in tact bitch,
but like the kid says u dis-count the votes to get an edge nice switch stitch.

barely descent

i still flow harder, i still bring the heat im fire,
your effort i admire but your style is so beginning to tire, your better? you liar!


barely descent


Ima leave this down to the vets to decide to them you cant hide,
but once you've lost and out of ideas dont click on brydon to try and confide.

barely descent


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keystyle for the hoe, an still i'll be concider a murder'a like jason
so i'll treat'em like he's last few complaint in our battle an ERASE'EM...

descent opener, this was pretty cool

so when u see a few Red dots, from info beams on glocks
u'll be standing around woundering if u got Chicken-Pox's....

barely descent


this aint for the amusment, my hit causes confussion
brains contusion, till u feel like u in the ring fighting illusion....

barely descent


i masterd abusing, get plasterd when im fumming,so dont stand next-to-him
cuz ya 'Text pushing the boarder-line like rampaging mexican....

descent closer


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This was a pretty cool battle. Both had a good opener and the verses were pretty entertaining. The flow was good but the concepts could use a little more development.


Vote - MurDaH187

NoCkTerNuL 05-12-09 06:15 PM

Voted For: Brydon

Both verses were forced. Some parts didn't make much sense, but looks like you put words in just to make it sound good

I pro-pack the diss to prove fact kid
but like the kid says u dis-count the votes to get an edge nice switch stitch
brains contusion, till u feel like u in the ring fighting illusion....

Both verses were kinda at the same level, so it's hard to call...

I just felt Brydon cam at it harder.

VOTE: Brydon
PEACE!!

MurDaH187 05-13-09 09:40 AM

What's good with more votes to end this old battle.......

Brydon 05-14-09 01:03 PM

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Brydon 05-16-09 01:20 PM

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Brydon 05-20-09 12:02 PM

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