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NoCkTerNuL 05-13-09 10:12 PM

NoCkTerNuL vs MurDaH187
 
Battle Rules:

8 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 60

Check in by: 05-15-09 at 10:12 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

MurDaH187 05-13-09 10:56 PM

15 min after check in?
I bet you on a regular computer so its ez to copy and paste your pre written from your word pad to the battle but me I can't do that on my g1 but whatever good luck....

System 05-14-09 02:15 AM

NoCkTerNuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-14-09 02:15 AM.

NoCkTerNuL 05-14-09 02:18 AM

“This kid is wack!...”


with just that! I could end this battle and beat him
That’s just how much he sucks… Worst on RV?.... that would be him
Are you serious?.. Did you even read your verse before you dropped it?
Murdah’s skills deserve a record like 1-87 losses (1)
Got his name right (murdah), this rap game… He’s killin it
The way he spits his verse it’s almost certain he’s illiterate
He don’t wanna say where he’s from, and I can’t tell
All I know’s he needs to take lesson from ESL(2)
You fillin verses with hurtin rhymes like you sickly
I’m certain this jerk will desert this game quite quickly
You all alone in this rap game you haven’t won this fight
His crew’s the B.E.S.T…. example’a how losing is done right (3)
Usin confusin rhymes that make people view you as stupid
Try to regroup but your “mad” rhymes just make you lose it (4)
A ko quick loss is what this is costing you foo!
I didn’t win this battle… your weak verse lost it for you!!

(1) His name is MurDaH187. stretched it out…
(2) English as a Second Language
(3) He’s apart of B.E.S.T. crew
(4) Mad = lose it. Lose the battle (GET IT?! EH… maybe not…)

yea i'll admit, i suck at free/Keystyling, but it don't take me that long to write my verse... goodluck...

NoCkTerNuL 05-14-09 04:18 AM

Write it down then type it..................................

NoCkTerNuL 05-14-09 01:53 PM

YO! Murdah. you guna drop or what? i know you're coming online... you got until 10 tonight. let's get this started already so we can get some votes...

System 05-15-09 01:08 PM

MurDaH187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-15-09 01:08 PM.

MurDaH187 05-15-09 01:22 PM

You should of keep at with the rookies now you battling murder like he in instensive care
Got a bounch of pre written trying to diss me, guess am on he's level the way I dissed this queer/

But you'll get stoned in your quest, when I dump the bone from your flesh
And have'em practis breath controll when I blow the lungs from your chest/

Punches nock an turn you, bitch am far from bitter
I could give you a perfect set up line an u still couldn't follow throu on twitter/

Murdah a master of crime, your a desastor with rhymes so stop ya bickering
The way am getting rid of this (w)rapper its like am littering/ ( you garbage )

And fuck 15 min to drop, you suck ya pre written will flop like shoes on clowns
You the king? I'll remove ya crown and ya 'Chain' like achiving a 1st down/

I don't even know how many bars I have in but don't matter since none of urs harming me
You wack bitch, you couldn't serve me with a 'deadly script' if you worked in a corrupt pharmacy/

I got guns that fire, bullets rush ya when my heater rupture
You'll be taking more shots then what a diabetic suffers/

Am wrecking'em like a geo metro vs a mac truck, This man fake
thinking he on top cuz he'll Gain, a loseing streak that'll stack up like ihop unlimited pan cake/

Eeeh still brushing the rust off.....

MurDaH187 05-15-09 01:26 PM

Intensive care....

Yea spelling mistakes of course for a rush verse what u exspect....

NoCkTerNuL 05-15-09 04:06 PM

eh... vote up people. honest votes please.

Implicit 05-16-09 06:25 AM

This was feedback posted for MurDaH187
 
jus checkin this battle out.. . .

MurDaH187 05-16-09 01:16 PM

You should of voted fam atless leave feed back or something...

Brydon 05-20-09 12:10 PM

Voted For: NoCkTerNuL

Rofl.........
Nock you had sum funny lines in there....
I believe knock won this with more wit and better personals.
Murdah your grammer hass got better but still needs alittle work. Structure is improving too.
Knock didnt seem to try that hard but it was enough to win this vote:knock

MurDaH187 05-21-09 12:07 PM

^^^ what the hell......

Reguardless of the matter he had he's shit pre written while am rushing writing in 15 min on my g1 phone so either way I came into this battle unfair but whatever.....

NoCkTerNuL 05-21-09 09:28 PM

let's battle again... 2 days to check in 2 days to spit. so you'll quit complaining


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