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schema 01-09-05 11:01 AM

17.Led Poetic vs. 21.Pop Lotty
 
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Designated Voters:
New Method
Mimesis
9th Degree
Un'Touched
Viscosity
Smokajoka666
Ladi fiya
4fil
Schema
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
Will a peer
Celestial

Pop Lotty 01-09-05 01:38 PM

yeh, this is what it was.
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Ancel 01-09-05 05:23 PM

WTF is up with all this bullshit... i mean damn just cause the shit got messed up dont mean you gotta change shit again... but whatever


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good luck pop

schema 01-13-05 03:21 PM

Verse deadlines extended to midnight friday.

Pop Lotty 01-13-05 11:04 PM

You earned your right to get here, but how could he lose
…vs. a washed up Chrit, and a couple of n00bs
Led Poetic, the best? Plz, I don’t gotta try my hardest…
…to drop LP quicker than most of these signed artist
Most of these niggas was picking you, u better, yet…
…why you started complaining when the battles was set?
You bite a lot, Faceless and Ainmo in the biters forum dude
…So I’m sure the Hall Of Shame…leads right to your room
Plus banned for being a bad mod, I’m killing you with every letter
Was Auspicious to win? No, just took his name to make your record look better
Not good, you think Pop is gonna respect you dog?
Schema, why wont you take some Led and pencil this a loss
Nobody cares about you, so your careers on ice dude
Wanna be respected so bad, you put a mod’s name in your title
This NewPort has just got smoked and straight up assaulted
and 5-0 won’t only be ya prize money, it’ll be who your callin
Now Led bout to drop, supposed to show us his peak?
We gon get ready for some HOTSHIT…his opponent for next week



Let's go..........

Ancel 01-14-05 03:36 PM

How can we respect Lotty? we all know this hoe blows..
Yeah I KOed Chrit....but didnt you make it this far by no shows??
Fuck it Lotty...just face it...you'll remain a wack bitch..
Saw ya verse in LLL...~AnD I JuSt CaNt ToP tHaT sHiT~~~!!//*
Got pissed on at RB & RV....fuck Pops got the worst shit
When every personal ya use been done...sorta like your bitch
You wont make it further in this tourney....cuz ya see...
..Im dope your wack...to sum it up...PL's just the opposite of LP
I pound this kid and leave bruises...and ya skin'll attract scars
..Wack kid posted his pic...he's the guy on the left in his avatar
I could give ya a face lift...but Im most likely bound...
To do the opposite....and get ya body lowered...into the ground
Dumb fuck...I dont know if it's amnesia...or the retard in him
But most kats have photographic memory..Lotty just lost the film
..Ya egos inflated but dont let ya wack skills go to ya...
Cuz with a head like that...I bet ya brain isnt scared of claustraphobia
Lotty know his shit? heh...at least I COULD fucking mod
..Im comin so dope ya SoulClapped'll turn into a fuckin applause

SmokaJoka. 01-14-05 04:22 PM

Best battle I've read on RV since I've been here....here we go

Quote:
Originally Posted by Pop Lotty
You earned your right to get here, but how could he lose
…vs. a washed up Chrit, and a couple of n00bs
Decent....not a hard punch....4/10
Led Poetic, the best? Plz, I don’t gotta try my hardest…
…to drop LP quicker than most of these signed artist
No..played like BLEH....2/10
Most of these niggas was picking you, u better, yet…
…why you started complaining when the battles was set?
Same as opener.....4/10
You bite a lot, Faceless and Ainmo in the biters forum dude
…So I’m sure the Hall Of Shame…leads right to your room
Nice....7/10
Plus banned for being a bad mod, I’m killing you with every letter
Was Auspicious to win? No, just took his name to make your record look better
Good....5/10
Not good, you think Pop is gonna respect you dog?
Schema, why wont you take some Led and pencil this a loss
Played....again...3/10
Nobody cares about you, so your careers on ice dude
Wanna be respected so bad, you put a mod’s name in your title
Huh?? You mean me? lol...[/lost]....Decent...4/10
This NewPort has just got smoked and straight up assaulted
and 5-0 won’t only be ya prize money, it’ll be who your callin
Played...3/10
Now Led bout to drop, supposed to show us his peak?
We gon get ready for some HOTSHIT…his opponent for next week
Could've been so much better....4/10


Pop Lotty's Overall Verse: 37/90
Comments:
You had alot of played out personals honestly.....a few were good, but you could've used them better punchwise...and honestly..if I remember correctly...I think your first verse you dropped is better than this one...still good job for the most part...



Quote:
Originally Posted by Led Poetic
How can we respect Lotty? we all know this hoe blows..
Yeah I KOed Chrit....but didnt you make it this far by no shows??
Decent....4/10
Fuck it Lotty...just face it...you'll remain a wack bitch..
Saw ya verse in LLL...~AnD I JuSt CaNt ToP tHaT sHiT~~~!!//*
Lol....good...6/10
Got pissed on at RB & RV....fuck Pops got the worst shit
When every personal ya use been done...sorta like your bitch
Played...3/10
You wont make it further in this tourney....cuz ya see...
..Im dope your wack...to sum it up...PL's just the opposite of LP
Nice...7/10
I pound this kid and leave bruises...and ya skin'll attract scars
..Wack kid posted his pic...he's the guy on the left in his avatar
Lol...been said before, but funny...5/10
I could give ya a face lift...but Im most likely bound...
To do the opposite....and get ya body lowered...into the ground
Good punch, wit, and wordplay...6/10
Dumb fuck...I dont know if it's amnesia...or the retard in him
But most kats have photographic memory..Lotty just lost the film
Meh....ok...3/10
..Ya egos inflated but dont let ya wack skills go to ya...
Cuz with a head like that...I bet ya brain isnt scared of claustraphobia
Decent...4/10
Lotty know his shit? heh...at least I COULD fucking mod
..Im comin so dope ya SoulClapped'll turn into a fuckin applause
Good reference...overall punch was decent...5/10


Led Poetic's Overall Verse: 43/90
Comments:
Centering your verse is gay shit...but you still done the best I've seen from you...iono....you started off ok....strong points were in the middle....slacked a bit before the end...and ended pretty good...


Vote - Led Poetic
Reason:
Just a harder verse honestly...Lotty had his ups and downs...and iono...alot of the personals you had...I've already seen said many other times...best lines were the LP PL line from Led..and the Hall of Shame line from Lotty....good read from you both...

New Meth0d 01-14-05 04:29 PM

How can we respect Lotty? we all know this hoe blows..
Yeah I KOed Chrit....but didnt you make it this far by no shows??
ight
Fuck it Lotty...just face it...you'll remain a wack bitch..
Saw ya verse in LLL...~AnD I JuSt CaNt ToP tHaT sHiT~~~!!//*
decent
Got pissed on at RB & RV....fuck Pops got the worst shit
When every personal ya use been done...sorta like your bitch
could have been worded better
You wont make it further in this tourney....cuz ya see...
..Im dope your wack...to sum it up...PL's just the opposite of LP
pretty good
I pound this kid and leave bruises...and ya skin'll attract scars
..Wack kid posted his pic...he's the guy on the left in his avatar
ight
I could give ya a face lift...but Im most likely bound...
To do the opposite....and get ya body lowered...into the ground
ight
Dumb fuck...I dont know if it's amnesia...or the retard in him
But most kats have photographic memory..Lotty just lost the film
ight...decent
..Ya egos inflated but dont let ya wack skills go to ya...
Cuz with a head like that...I bet ya brain isnt scared of claustraphobia
nice
Lotty know his shit? heh...at least I COULD fucking mod
..Im comin so dope ya SoulClapped'll turn into a fuckin applause
lol good

You earned your right to get here, but how could he lose
…vs. a washed up Chrit, and a couple of n00bs
decent.. pretty good
Led Poetic, the best? Plz, I don’t gotta try my hardest…
…to drop LP quicker than most of these signed artist
lol good name play
Most of these niggas was picking you, u better, yet…
…why you started complaining when the battles was set?
ehh..ight
You bite a lot, Faceless and Ainmo in the biters forum dude
…So I’m sure the Hall Of Shame…leads right to your room
good
Plus banned for being a bad mod, I’m killing you with every letter
Was Auspicious to win? No, just took his name to make your record look
better
good
Not good, you think Pop is gonna respect you dog?
Schema, why wont you take some Led and pencil this a loss
nice
Nobody cares about you, so your careers on ice dude
Wanna be respected so bad, you put a mod’s name in your title
pretty good
This NewPort has just got smoked and straight up assaulted
and 5-0 won’t only be ya prize money, it’ll be who your callin
lol nice
Now Led bout to drop, supposed to show us his peak?
We gon get ready for some HOTSHIT…his opponent for next week
would be good if soc hadnt already ko'd him

ight basically pop lotty got this he had better personals better punches, he was more creative and wittier. led poetic's verse had some good lines but was filled with just ight lines, that werent hittin hard.

v/pop

Celestial 01-14-05 04:34 PM

You bite a lot, Faceless and Ainmo in the biters forum dude
…So I’m sure the Hall Of Shame…leads right to your room

vs

Fuck it Lotty...just face it...you'll remain a wack bitch..
Saw ya verse in LLL...~AnD I JuSt CaNt ToP tHaT sHiT~~~!!//*
You wont make it further in this tourney....cuz ya see...
..Im dope your wack...to sum it up...PL's just the opposite of LP
I could give ya a face lift...but Im most likely bound...
To do the opposite....and get ya body lowered...into the ground
Lotty know his shit? heh...at least I COULD fucking mod
..Im comin so dope ya SoulClapped'll turn into a fuckin applause


I actually thought Pop Lotty was going to win here.. I heard he was good.. but i was surpised when Led really merked.. nice job Led..

Poetic wins 4 punches to 1

schema 01-15-05 11:51 AM

Pop Lotty
You earned your right to get here, but how could he lose
…vs. a washed up Chrit, and a couple of n00bs
->>pretty good...feelin it...7/10
Led Poetic, the best? Plz, I don’t gotta try my hardest…
…to drop LP quicker than most of these signed artist
->>meh...so-so...5/10
Most of these niggas was picking you, u better, yet…
…why you started complaining when the battles was set?
->>kinda awkward wording but pretty good...6/10
You bite a lot, Faceless and Ainmo in the biters forum dude
…So I’m sure the Hall Of Shame…leads right to your room
->>kinda awkward wording but pretty good...7/10
Plus banned for being a bad mod, I’m killing you with every letter
Was Auspicious to win? No, just took his name to make your record look better
->>streeeetched...decent...5/10
Not good, you think Pop is gonna respect you dog?
Schema, why wont you take some Led and pencil this a loss
->>kinda played but alright...6/10
Nobody cares about you, so your careers on ice dude
Wanna be respected so bad, you put a mod’s name in your title
->>nahhh...4/10
This NewPort has just got smoked and straight up assaulted
and 5-0 won’t only be ya prize money, it’ll be who your callin
->>I get the wordplay but it doesnt really make sense in this context...5/10
Now Led bout to drop, supposed to show us his peak?
We gon get ready for some HOTSHIT…his opponent for next week
->>decent...5/10
->>overall...46/90 (51%)

Led Poetic
How can we respect Lotty? we all know this hoe blows..
Yeah I KOed Chrit....but didnt you make it this far by no shows??
->>worded funny but pretty good...6/10
Fuck it Lotty...just face it...you'll remain a wack bitch..
Saw ya verse in LLL...~AnD I JuSt CaNt ToP tHaT sHiT~~~!!//*
->>you put a star but you forgot to explain it...4/10
Got pissed on at RB & RV....fuck Pops got the worst shit
When every personal ya use been done...sorta like your bitch
->>playyyyed...4/10
You wont make it further in this tourney....cuz ya see...
..Im dope your wack...to sum it up...PL's just the opposite of LP
->>good but second line stretched like whoa...7/10
I pound this kid and leave bruises...and ya skin'll attract scars
..Wack kid posted his pic...he's the guy on the left in his avatar
->>lol...7/10
I could give ya a face lift...but Im most likely bound...
To do the opposite....and get ya body lowered...into the ground
->>wack...3/10
Dumb fuck...I dont know if it's amnesia...or the retard in him
But most kats have photographic memory..Lotty just lost the film
->>huh? 4/10
..Ya egos inflated but dont let ya wack skills go to ya...
Cuz with a head like that...I bet ya brain isnt scared of claustraphobia
->>meh...5/10
Lotty know his shit? heh...at least I COULD fucking mod
..Im comin so dope ya SoulClapped'll turn into a fuckin applause
->>nice....8/10
->>overall...48/90 (53%)

v/Led Poetic

~Lady Fiya~ 01-15-05 12:20 PM

How can we respect Lotty? we all know this hoe blows..
Yeah I KOed Chrit....but didnt you make it this far by no shows??
^^^nice opener lmao.. Coulda been worded better tho.. 7/10
Fuck it Lotty...just face it...you'll remain a wack bitch..
Saw ya verse in LLL...~AnD I JuSt CaNt ToP tHaT sHiT~~~!!//*
^^^u never explained it.. 3/10
Got pissed on at RB & RV....fuck Pops got the worst shit
When every personal ya use been done...sorta like your bitch
^^^u always talkin bout sumbody bitch (played) lol.. 2/10
You wont make it further in this tourney....cuz ya see...
..Im dope your wack...to sum it up...PL's just the opposite of LP
^^^this was one of the best lines in here… mos def 8/10
I pound this kid and leave bruises...and ya skin'll attract scars
..Wack kid posted his pic...he's the guy on the left in his avatar
^^^funny LOL 7/10.….
I could give ya a face lift...but Im most likely bound...
To do the opposite....and get ya body lowered...into the ground
^^^not good blah 2/10
Dumb fuck...I dont know if it's amnesia...or the retard in him
But most kats have photographic memory..Lotty just lost the film
^^^nice metaphor, need to word it better tho… decent 5/10
..Ya egos inflated but dont let ya wack skills go to ya...
Cuz with a head like that...I bet ya brain isnt scared of claustrophobia
^^^lmfao…. Omg ha ha pretty good.. 5/10
Lotty know his shit? heh...at least I COULD fucking mod
..Im comin so dope ya SoulClapped'll turn into a fuckin applause
^^^best closer in the battle, creative…7/10
46/90 = 51.1%

You earned your right to get here, but how could he lose
…vs. a washed up Chrit, and a couple of n00bs
^^^rofl.. Nice personal and opener 8/10
Led Poetic, the best? Plz, I don’t gotta try my hardest…
…to drop LP quicker than most of these signed artist
^^^was feelin the metas… not a hard punch tho.. 4/10
Most of these niggas was picking you, u better, yet…
…why you started complaining when the battles was set?
^^^still not hard-hittin… 3/10
You bite a lot, Faceless and Ainmo in the biters forum dude
…So I’m sure the Hall Of Shame…leads right to your room
^^^nice personal.. LMFAO omg 8/10
Plus banned for being a bad mod, I’m killing you with every letter
Was Auspicious to win? No, just took his name to make your record look better
^^^another good personal.. Kinda stretched there, ey? 3/10
Not good, you think Pop is gonna respect you dog?
Schema, why wont you take some Led and pencil this a loss
^^^hella played… 2/10
Nobody cares about you, so your careers on ice dude
Wanna be respected so bad, you put a mod’s name in your title
^^^another personal but not effective.. 3/10
This NewPort has just got smoked and straight up assaulted
and 5-0 won’t only be ya prize money, it’ll be who your callin
^^^needed to be worded better to be more effective.. 5/10
Now Led bout to drop, supposed to show us his peak?
We gon get ready for some HOTSHIT…his opponent for next weekLet's go..........
^^nice closer sayin he’ll battle Hotshh for 3rd place.. Lol 6.9/10

42.9/90 = 47.7%

Aight this ain’t too hard to explain.. Led Poetic came a lil’ more harder than Pop Lotty.. Pop Lotty had some really good lines but the wording took away the effect of your punches… but both y’all had sum played lines..

v/ Led Poetic

Mier 01-15-05 12:41 PM

^ what are you talking about?

~Lady Fiya~ 01-15-05 12:46 PM

this is a tourney, it's called voting, if your name is on the list for the voting council or whatever then you shouldn't post in here..

--schema u can delete this post-- lo siento....

R.Christensen 01-16-05 05:00 PM

vote - reset this 4 me vs lotty


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