(0-0) The Black Plague Vs Blackmage (0-0)
 

I'm checkin in for the battle i'm ready so any time we wanna get this movin we can

now question, so far all the multi matches were basically battles. Is it the best multi's or basically the same thing as a battle only multis are equal to the punches. get at me

multis are equal to da punches but its based on multi's but punches do count

-kon

Checkin in this shit...

what's the line limit for this battle so i don't go over and end up like pleim

6 to 8 lines...read the rules to make sure you
dont do anything else to get a dq...

might as well drop now...Grand hustlas stand up*hands black plague a note*

The black mage wit his track rage will spread like the "black plague" to match aids
"born" in detrioit but you lack "raised" the "black plague" was a wack phase
i bend twits wit the simplist pen twists your not in this
you're the death of me...threat to me....no you're the same as your interests*opens*
*ya vocation's ya location* pass it down,you win? "right mac", no you're casket bound
dog walk you like a basset hound,lyrically i spray fastest rounds to L.ay A.sses D.own
"da truth's" the glare is bright i wear it right you stare at night but i'll share the light
to fairer fight i'll impare my sight and use none you get a pair a mic's(paramik)

exp: aids kills alot of people a year
black plague fell off a long time ago
check profile for interests, location, im screen name and crew(in that order
he lost to "paramik" and "da truth"

Sorry about it keepin on rolling over into other lines, it was all one liners when i typed it.

Yo blackmage jus backspace ya verse, this a lyrical rape caught on tape
This battle a page of murder..pray to god to save you from death today
You a shame to RV.. Lame raps.. Only thing u rhyme was our names
Naw plague aint playin no games, “documentin” my raps like The Game
Crushin ya “hopes“, nope it don’t float like sinkin boats, why you try me?
Plague got you on the ropes, u croaked like a toad, death certain like HIV
This ya 2nd “nightmare”, I write fear leave u needin a new pair of underwear*
Let you live to have kids so they might hear about black rippin that white queer

*Lost to a dude named nightmare

The black mage wit his track rage will spread like the "black plague" to match aids
"born" in detrioit but you lack "raised" the "black plague" was a wack phase
pretty decent punch here, it was aight
i bend twits wit the simplist pen twists your not in this
you're the death of me...threat to me....no you're the same as your interests*opens*
nah, not feelin this punch
*ya vocation's ya location* pass it down,you win? "right mac", no you're casket bound
dog walk you like a basset hound,lyrically i spray fastest rounds to L.ay A.sses D.own
uhh…kinda decent here
"da truth's" the glare is bright i wear it right you stare at night but i'll share the light
to fairer fight i'll impare my sight and use none you get a pair a mic's(paramik)
good use of multi’s…punch was okay

The Black Plague
Yo blackmage jus backspace ya verse, this a lyrical rape caught on tape
This battle a page of murder..pray to god to save you from death today
decent opener, punch was on point
You a shame to RV.. Lame raps.. Only thing u rhyme was our names
Naw plague aint playin no games, “documentin” my raps like The Game
um…decent punch
Crushin ya “hopes“, nope it don’t float like sinkin boats, why you try me?
Plague got you on the ropes, u croaked like a toad, death certain like HIV
nah, aint feelin tha punch, but good use of the multi’s hea
This ya 2nd “nightmare”, I write fear leave u needin a new pair of underwear*
Let you live to have kids so they might hear about black rippin that white queer
decent punch

Overall both had good drops
Both had good use of the multi’s
But to me I think that TBP came
Harder in this battle though,
Punches were just harder and the
Multi’s were good here + the flow

No hate to both

The black mage wit his track rage will spread like the "black plague" to match aids
"born" in detrioit but you lack "raised" the "black plague" was a wack phase
*****bunch of multis, repeated a couple decent punch
i bend twits wit the simplist pen twists your not in this
you're the death of me...threat to me....no you're the same as your interests*opens*
***not too good but its ok
*ya vocation's ya location* pass it down,you win? "right mac", no you're casket bound
dog walk you like a basset hound,lyrically i spray fastest rounds to L.ay A.sses D.own
***for some reason i dig this bar
"da truth's" the glare is bright i wear it right you stare at night but i'll share the light
to fairer fight i'll impare my sight and use none you get a pair a mic's(paramik
***ehhh... i guess its ok



Yo blackmage jus backspace ya verse, this a lyrical rape caught on tape
This battle a page of murder..pray to god to save you from death today
***decent bar but not alot of multis in there
You a shame to RV.. Lame raps.. Only thing u rhyme was our names
Naw plague aint playin no games, “documentin” my raps like The Game
****no multis and the punch was self glorify
Crushin ya “hopes“, nope it don’t float like sinkin boats, why you try me?
Plague got you on the ropes, u croaked like a toad, death certain like HIV
***good bar like the set up better than the 2nd line
This ya 2nd “nightmare”, I write fear leave u needin a new pair of underwear*
Let you live to have kids so they might hear about black rippin that white queer
*****aiight closer on this one


i gotta go with black mage....no hate plague but mage had more multis and your punches werent good enuff to pick up the slack

im not going to break this down....
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i basically agree with hotshh's break down....
blackmage a lil repetitive but you had multi's n incorporated
punches ya vocab needs a lil work but your on the right track..
.
plague..you barely had any multi's in ya verse at all..
that was your main downfall,..your punches were ok.....
overall...v/mage

yeah blackmage in this 1 u did repeat urself alot but u had multis & a decent wordplay u'll get betta wit time;while plague u didn't have such a good wordplay & ur punches were way off 2 me in this battle

overall vote is 4 blackmage

Black Plague: your opener was alrite I saw the punch but i didnt think it was really strong buut the multis were cool. Your closer was quite good, it didnt flow so good but a good punch. Your punches were really good in the middle, some nice metaphors but your multis werent totally up to scratch.

Blackmage: your opener was cool, a good punch and some nice multis in there. Your closer was ok, i wasnt feeling it too much to be honest bro. Your punches were cool aswel but your multis were really good, some nice metaphors aswel. I was feeling ya verse more for multis. So this is to you.

Unlucky Black Plague, your punches were better but ya multis wasnt.

vote: Blackmage

blackmage wins 4-1

Black mages new record 1-0
Black plagues new record 0-1