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Chritt Rapbattles Mod Diss!!
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huh
chrit is wak ahahahhahhahahhahaha battle him then kid u prlly his alies are sum shit or sum mod or sumthin funy tho u shud merk him an get ya first win |
Lmmfao
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Damn. Shit was pretty good. Probably one of the best tracks I've heard from an internet head. Quality was nice and your flow was on point 95% of the time. I only really noticed it fallin off once. You went off beat once or twice, too, but it's straight. Good shit. The caps lock and assault charge thing were nice. Haha. Stay up, kid.
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[quote]Lmmfao
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Sounds like...eThug... |
uhhh...this shit was coo...but ya flow was off, more than once...ya delivery was a little off...lyrics were nice, but the verse structure was kinda weak...coo for a little diss...nothin too special...i liked the caps lock line...that once probably hit the best...good shit....
.peace. |
this was funny in places, and the beat is ill!
*woosh* |
You're Scheme Is Horrible Lmao, Half Of
You're Lines Don't Even Rhyme . You're Flow Is Crooked, You're Emotion & Delivery Was About The Only thing Good . |
haha liked the punches about him being a text cee,
u had good flow, nice beat, good delivery, bah u should work on your breathing a lil bit, but other then that........bhahahaahaahaha funny as fuck punchlines man...................... |
lmfao . . . chrit you know you my homie . . .
. . . but you just got rode on like . . . WHOA! |
lmao
okay The only reason my flow is off or I fall off beat at all is because I wrote the diss with no beat, then tried to find a beat to match. Im sorry but I dont care enough about internet beef to spend time on it, I got blazed and bored so I decided to spit this over a beat. If you think I have no flow you can look at the rest of the tracks on my page. (Look at "Sage Verses" probably best example of my variety of styles) I was also stoned beyond belief and my throat was KICKED. You should see the buddah I got right now wooo.. but anyways that affected my breath control because it hurt me to inhale. Lol. lol.. this is the most feedback I've ever gotten and its from dissing some wack homosexual mod. Ah well this shit was fun. Jokes. peace |
YOU SUCK LEARNTO RAP
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