C.A.L.I VS George k. Stanza
 

Check Ins Must Be In By Friday Or Your Topic Wont Be Given...
If Check Ins Are In Then You Will Be Given A topic To Write About...
Poems Then Must Be In By Sunday And Voting Will Be Over On Tuesday...
Topic:in a unknown area

i guess you didn't see that i wanted to be signed out of this
but meh, lol...guess i will stay after all :)
anyways check...
much luck Empire

^good luck your one of the few people i rv i like and respect good luck george;)

Cold metal air thick with urines stench
Hunger twists my body as spasms force my stomach to wrench
Darkness in this room in the distance lights blaze low
Outlines of objects cast menacing shadows in thier lazy glow
Silience has a soft humming sound and i hear it now
All around
Like the buzzing of bees i hear the thud of my heart beat as i calm down
I stand on cold stone my bones froze
as the cold wind whips through my battered clothes
I reach out but my extension is short only handfulls of air return
Then in one turn realazation hits and my eyes burn
as tears flow like small fountains down my faces path
And hell baptizies me in fire as i fail to realize where my placements at
I see the window open cold breezes pushing through the screens holes
Nightmares hit me like dark demons yet my scream holds
I push hard on the bars which movement ceases from
Foolish teachers who are trained in our enviroments to teach us dumb
Now im too stupid.........................
NO im too ignorant to know that im trapped
My hourglass cracked...................
as i cut my hands on shattered fragements trying to push the sand back
Cuz im lost in a unknown area and no one knows where im at:(

Nothing's innocent it's the incentive in,
sin and it's been a friend pent within a pen
left, the venom injected reflections dissect sentiment
wrenched with intent from my head
on a quest to collect the intimate...
impressions hid repressed amidst the caustic locked away
in a closet where even God’s grip fought to pick the safe
a Bic the makeshift Faust fixed a faucet upon my brain
evicting the strain as thoughts drip....

fuck im sorry mayne...
this was all i got done, i was busy as hell this
weekend and on top of that i felt like shit
today. So as you may have guessed
writing wasn't a top priority. Again i apologize
i hadn't intended for this to happen and i wanted
to post at least what i had done so you wouldnt
feel like you wasted a verse. I know it's not 20
so you can dq meh if ya want but i just didnt
want you to think i was ducking or gonna no show

AII This was Very Very Very close But Im Sorry I Gotta Give My Vote To CALI .....Because He Poem really Stood out And Made Me really Feel it if you know what I Mean ........GKS Poem was good to But I Did See some Minor Errors and stuff but trust me When I Say ThiS battle is gonna make Battle of the week in the magz LOL But I Had To Give my vote to CALI bcuz It seems That He Really Put He best Foot Foward .....
v/ CALI

there was no errors mayne
my structure was flawless
but you didnt really have to explain your vote
mine wasn't even 20 lines
cali should get this without a doubt

^well See I Really Wish Youd Stay In The League Bro:(

if i need to explain my vote i will

vote=cali....