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MIDDLEWEIGHT: Tweety >vs< Drama Queen
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa. Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Drakel or Drama Queen or Sokaris). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. If you dont ask for an extention, and drop whenever you feel like it you will be disqualified. Do not abuse extentions, they are not to be used if you're just too lazy to drop within the confines of the circumstances. Leave reasonable explanation for your absense. If the League notices you are a slacker due to this nature you will be banned for being out-right slothfully callous. Don't ho-show because you will be banned if you do it twice. We can understand you cannot drop due to certain circumstances but if this happens a second time, you're banned from the league for 2 weeks. If you signed up for both leagues and you no-show in one league twice, you will be banned in both leagues! Try to limit the freeposts, we will have a chat/beef thread for that. Also give fully explained votes, if not your votes won't count! New rule: first to get 3 votes wins by KO TOPIC: Realistic Dream |
Checking in............................................and what's the topic?
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Checkity Check Check
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I got a extension till saturday.......................
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^^^yes that is true.
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Extension extended till Sunday, both approved
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Realistic Dream Mere fabric painted with stars and stripes Wrapped around my smooth skin Steered by sweet and sour sin But is it love or luscious lust I feel within? Your finger softly brushing over my trembling lips As of touching an innocent child Blinding me with Twinkling eyes Bright smile Putting your teeth into covering textile Naked Your arms as protective shields Treating me so gently As if I’m made of porcelain Your strong hands seeking For their home Which they find Inside me Darkness surrounds me No light, no air Nothing No more silk touch Gone is your love Vulnerable No more protection No shielding arms Nothing Blinking my grayish eyes No one here to hold me Only my teddy bear Hugging him close Foolish as I am Just a dream Will you make it A reality? |
.:The Fight:.
As I'm hot and angry as an erupted volcano My yells echoed towards my own mother ..Sensing that her heart's been crushed I Kept yelling and yelling, imagining ..in my head, seeing her squirming into ....Tears, with an soul that'll rot to the core. But that didn’t happen. She Fought back. I was amazed, and shocked Chills came running up my spine from her admonish yell towards me. I felt like i was in a deep hole Looking upon her angry eyes. She's letting my know this is HERS her Turf I'm in her life, she owned me With guilt, I walked away Knowing she was right and I was wrong I left one remark before I went into my room "I hope you die" I said :Sleep: I cried, and cried With my sobbing tears, coursed on my pillow Wetness, I felt on my cheek I cried and cried Heavily breathing, Choked up by the tears My lips Spasm, my heart is beating so loud. ...Echoed in my head, of the mirror glass I just broken. I can still hear the clanging of the pieces of glass falling into the floor. I keep telling myself, that she didn't care Every-time I do, agony strikes in my heart. She knows She's wrong, and mom is right but I refuse to see the truth. As the tears coursing down on my cheeks Before my Eye lids goes completely shut. I say I hope she dies Die Die I hope she dies .: Dream:. Appeared to be standing in front of a hospital bed, with my moms body in it. Cold staring eyes Looking daring at me. I felt so uneasy. Then she said "Why you kill me?" My utter expression starts questioning With an utter of quick motion the bed starts to move so violently I Screamed in horror, blood spilling out of her mouth. She kept hearing Why you kill me? Why you kill me?!! Then Everything felt so dark, Like I was alone I screamed but no one can hear me. Tears starts coursing down from my pupil. A face appeared above me. My father. With an thunderous vocals it echoed "Why you kill her?" Why?... Then my grandma face appeared "Why you kill her?" She cared about you. . . Sobbing into tears, I screamed "No, I didn’t do it". Feels like I can't breathe, from being choked by tears. I felt a total of wetness around me Bubbles starts to appear in front of my face. Just realize I'm in deep, deep in water. Gasping for air My arms reaching for the surface I can't reach it It's moving away. Father, grandma, looking down at me With smiles on their faces Inside of me getting so teary Even though I'm in a ocean I can feel tears on my cheeks I hear their Laughter’s Echoing in my ear "Time for you to die Die Die No good-byes Just die!" *no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* "reality check" Woke up heavy breathing and sweating Through my lungs I'm panting Feeling so un-aware. *Panting, panting* My foots touching the floor. My shudder fingers clenching on the door-knob Every-thing was so dark That's because of the lights were off. My foots springing to my mom door Thinking "Please be alive" Tears coming down Everything happen in a slow motion. "Please be alive" Knock on the door But no answer I screamed out her name Pounded on the door my hands hurt in agony Then the door opens Saw her face then my arms clung to her waist *I'm sorry mom* Felt the arms around mines Never felt something soothing so loveable. *I love you mommy* |
I'll vote as long as Tweety doesn't take it as p-riding or hate. ^^ Sound good?
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V/ DQ
. . . Aight .Lola Cruez. II---i feel that you would do really good in topicals......but i really wasnt feeling yours.....i cant put my finger on it but your missing something...oh yeah rhyming words.....now i know that all poems dont need to rhyme but rhyming really shows off ones skill.....but my advise is stick to Topicals your obiously freggin ill at that...... . . DQ-I was feeling your verse all the way through......nice imagery.....Killer metas.....and great abstract thinking.......nice piece here....Loved it...... . . Aight i go for quality over quanity and thats exactly the story here......great drops by both but i gotta go with DQ.........Peayce |
'bout damn time. Drama Queens wins the middleweight title.
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