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~philosopher~ vs 9th Degree
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6 - 12 Lines 3-0 is a k.o. No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topical Battle: Being framed for murdering your wife good luck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 10-13-04 at 11:21 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 09:55 PM.
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~philosopher~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 09:56 PM.
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Standin' in court, hands folded at my waist Watchin' false testimonies shape the outcome of my case Blank look on my face, one of her colleagues at the stand I knew she was fuckin' him, he prolly did it, damn! It's gettin' hot, I'm sweatin', nervous, I didn't do this shit I feel like Harrison Ford in the beginning of The Fugitive I ain't used to this, dishonor of bein' framed Although a .45 with my prints laid next to where she was slain And I was passed out on the floor, empty vodka bottle in my hand Goddamn! All this planned just 'cuz she already had a man Her fam givin' me cold stares, make me wish that they killed me Verdict's in, 'fore judge opened his mouth I know I'm guilty Damn... |
Me and my boys are at the bar, we get into a little fight/
I get roughed up a bit, but everybody else is allright/ As night subsides and dusk arrives I deside to pack it up and go home/ Alas, I arrive to a wide open door, and realise that I am not alone/ I recall hearing a loud sound "Freeze sir! Get on the Ground!"/ As I look around I see my wifes dead body, was she shot down?/ "Officer, this is my wife, I wouldn't do this, I swear i'm innocent"/ He replies with a chauckle "If only I had a buck everytime I heard this"/ I get thrown in jail with no bail, destined to live a morbid life in my empty-cell, it's earth in hell/ But thats the least of my problems, they think I killed my wife, my life is like an empty-shell/ I remember, while drunk I had a fight on that horrifick night with my beloved wife/ *Reaches in pocket, pulls out bloody nife* It can't be!,*The man ends his life*/ |
Ok uppin this...........................................
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Word, let's get the voting started already!!!...50
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Damn ya'll dont sleep on this uppin...............
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Vote on this already, I wanna close some battles so I can do more battles lol yay for battles I need a beer...
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Uppin come on you damn sleepers ! :) vote on this.
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Damn bitches vote, ps. This battle dedicated to almo, my friend who died of the ugly desiese.... just playin wit you
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Fuck it y'all, vote on this shit already goddamnit
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Voted For: 9th Degree
these we both pretty good but i like 9th's spit better just because it flwos better when ur reading it and its a little easier to follow n i can see some ish like that holla at ya boy http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=155562 |
uppin this........................................
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This was feedback posted for ~philosopher~
good battle we have here, good luck fam
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